Raighnbow

Biutafel cullers
Alll twingcling in the scki
Leetl dropps of glittr
Peur and kleeane and frehsch
Daanse too the beete of the winndh
Onlii tym kann maac tham pheigd

naturefree verse

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rhaya artlyy

September 15, 2026 at 6:23 AM

I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly

Beata Agustin

December 28, 2023 at 12:52 AM

I wish I could understand this. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

James Horn

November 20, 2021 at 6:33 AM

Where did he (she) go.

poemtheart poemtheart

January 1, 2020 at 12:11 AM

this in absolutely incredible writing.. :) plz keep writing & sharing :)

Ibohal Kshetrimayum

November 27, 2018 at 1:52 AM

Wonderful words. Love the poem in the way you write.

Skat A

May 4, 2016 at 10:24 AM

Sarah, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back and read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

January 27, 2016 at 8:19 PM

SHARAH, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

September 9, 2015 at 9:02 AM

lovely poem... SKAT

Ovidiu Bocsa

January 31, 2015 at 1:59 PM

Beautiful,exotical,colorful,enjoyable.I heard of Andorra from Max Frisch and you.Vest regards.

Sue Mason

October 24, 2009 at 10:07 AM

Your use of letters is incredible here, Kimberly! Very, very clever almost like you've created another language. Congratulations on having your writing featured this week at the Soup!!

Elaine George

October 22, 2009 at 11:47 AM

Beautiful colors All twinkling in the sky Little drops of glitter Pure and clean and fresh Dance to the beat of the wind Only time can make them fade. Very beautiful, Kimberly. Thank you for sharing. Lainie