Raighnbow

Biutafel cullers Alll twingcling in the scki Leetl dropps of glittr Peur and kleeane and frehsch Daanse too the beete of the winndh Onlii tym kann maac tham pheigd

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/28/2023 12:52:00 AM

I wish I could understand this. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

James Horn

Date: 11/20/2021 6:33:00 AM

Where did he (she) go.

Muddasar Javad

Date: 1/1/2020 12:11:00 AM

this in absolutely incredible writing.. :) plz keep writing & sharing :)

Ibohal Kshetrimayum

Date: 11/27/2018 1:52:00 AM

Wonderful words. Love the poem in the way you write.

Skat A

Date: 5/4/2016 10:24:00 AM

Sarah, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back and read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2016 8:19:00 PM

SHARAH, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 9/9/2015 9:02:00 AM

lovely poem... SKAT

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 1/31/2015 1:59:00 PM

Beautiful,exotical,colorful,enjoyable.I heard of Andorra from Max Frisch and you.Vest regards.

Sue Mason

Date: 10/24/2009 10:07:00 AM

Your use of letters is incredible here, Kimberly! Very, very clever almost like you've created another language. Congratulations on having your writing featured this week at the Soup!!

Elaine George

Date: 10/22/2009 11:47:00 AM

Beautiful colors All twinkling in the sky Little drops of glitter Pure and clean and fresh Dance to the beat of the wind Only time can make them fade. Very beautiful, Kimberly. Thank you for sharing. Lainie