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Ragged

Ragged Ragged heartbeats, Shut in But not Shut out, Tattered heartbreak, Tragedy Flung From high towers Swooping down in towering tornados Descending Ascending from foul marshes Quick sand Stalking careless footsteps - Stealthy quagmires – fetid slime - Like a shredded storm - Lurk by the doorstep Round the corner Up the highway On the highroad Near the low road Alone But not lonely Colleagues of long ago, Companions on the quests, Coax my muse to contemplation Far from the scheduled, frantic crowd, Erratic cacophony Blowing horns, sirens, Lonely whistles of nighttime trains In frayed harmonies Wooing scruffy inner child Emerge Play again; Bundled up against the frozen banshee’s breath, Sitting in the lap of time - Lost and unrestrained In candied dawns and lavender midnights, Ignoring the scream of seconds to pay attention Startled by life peeping in through rosettes – Intruder with vacant eyes - Calling dance with the dance macabre To the dirge of who knows when shutters close; Turned out Not turned away Turning ‘round - Grabbing the hand of verse – friend called lyric - To the sound of remembered carousels enchantment; Freeing elfin earthbound energy; Essence escaping boundaries at a welcoming hearth, Exploding From isolation’s shabby womb. 10-5-21 Contest: “R” Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 10/8/2021 12:26:00 PM
Sam, congratulations on your win with this great verse.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/19/2021 10:59:00 AM
Hi Eve! Can you tell how far behind I am answering email? Thank you so much for your note of congratulations, your constant support and feedback! So appreciated. Sending you blessings!
Date: 10/8/2021 10:13:00 AM
wow, so many great images were in this poem. All from that word Ragged!! I especially loved this line (and the others in its stanza)In candied dawns and lavender midnights, (Congrats for your win)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/8/2021 11:58:00 AM
Andrea, thank you many times over! I have to admit I too love that line. Wasn't sure if it fit, but I kept it anyway. Thanks for affirming my decision. I agree with you. It is truly amazing to see how a one word prompt can inspire so many iterations and images! I am really enjoying Constance' alphabetical prompt poems. Trying to get to everyone on Constance' winners lists as there are so many wonderful writes! Take care my friend!
Date: 10/7/2021 3:37:00 PM
Wow! Sam, We chose the same word, and I must say you wrote such a well-written and profound write. Congratulations on your winning write; it was well deserved. Have a great day;-) Alexis
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Date: 10/7/2021 2:15:00 PM
Startled by life peeping in through rosettes – Intruder with vacant eyes - Congratulations on your well-deserved win Sam, you wrote a fantastic poem.
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Date: 10/7/2021 1:17:00 PM
Excellent ink Sam, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/7/2021 1:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan. This placement, among so many poetic gems, is truly an honor! I am so glad you enjoyed Ragged. Sending you blessings and a hug! :D
Date: 10/7/2021 12:52:00 PM
Congratulations, Sam. Quite and imagery and contrasting atmosphere, emotions and putting your feet on the ground to whatever comes. Have a blessed day.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/7/2021 1:10:00 PM
Many thanks and much gratitude coming your way Marilene. So grateful for your reading of Ragged and your thoughtful message. You always pick up on the subtle elements of my poems and inspire me! Sending you blessings for your birthday tomorrow!
Date: 10/7/2021 9:32:00 AM
Wonderful writing with great images. Congratulations!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/7/2021 1:04:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris. Your visits and inspiring messages always make my day a little brighter! Sending you blessings!
Date: 10/7/2021 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Sam - such a remarkable poem! You always manage to amaze your readers with great images and excellent word choices. Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/7/2021 1:19:00 PM
Mala, thank you many times over for your congratulations and your thoughtful messages! You always inspire me to keep creating, to continue to explore words and give my image playmates verbal life! How blessed am I to have such a wonderful colleague-friend-mentor such as you! Sending you many blessings, much love and a hug!
Date: 10/7/2021 7:46:00 AM
Sam, congratulations on your win in my "R" contest with this beautiful poem, so well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/7/2021 1:13:00 PM
Constance, thank you not only for your placement but for your wonderful prompt words that inspire so much creativity and motivation! Your placement is a honor especially among the creative gems on the winners list. Sending you many blessings along with my thanks for all that you do!
Date: 10/6/2021 2:40:00 PM
This is so glorious and heartbreaking all at once, but I really love the ending stanza! Should be a top winner~
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/7/2021 11:09:00 AM
Thank you so much Michelle! It is such an honor to be on the winners list with so many amazing poems. I am so glad that you liked this one. With all of the darkness in the previous stanzas I just couldn't help but add light and hope to the last stanza. Take care. Blessings!

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