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Radiant Flowers-Lune

under the blue sky greenfield blooms with radiant flowers. *picture 5*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/16/2015 11:26:00 PM
What a wonderful imagery olusegun! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/16/2015 8:59:00 PM
Olusegun, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/16/2015 1:30:00 AM
Olusegun, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love
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Date: 8/15/2015 7:41:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/15/2015 7:26:00 AM
Your poem is radiant, grats on your placing :)
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Date: 8/15/2015 1:31:00 AM
Olusegun, the last line has an extra syllable but that does not diminish the fact that this is a very pretty lune! Congrats in my contest. Loved that line "greenfield blooms"
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Date: 8/13/2015 5:29:00 PM
olu, this is a colorful, vivid oiece.. well done!.. huggs
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Date: 8/7/2015 5:19:00 PM
A well written piece, I love your descriptive it is eloquence.......A.M.
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Date: 8/6/2015 2:15:00 PM
beautifully descriptive - good luck in the contest:-( hugs Jan xx
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