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Radiance of Mortality

perched upon gray branches in leafless trees blackbirds rest on their journey to nowhere an icy red wine sky leaps into our mind just over the horizon a mysterious radiant mortality looms as it waits church bells toll in the valleys a pain in my head reaches a crescendo the illness rages dirty linen is left here the body quakes and quivers with the fever night brings a moonless horror crickets sing raspy breathing slows body stiffens as the woeful spirit releases death arrives in a radiance of darkness as the sun rises eyes open to a different view of life is death the absolute end or just a new beginning
1/12/2021 Suzette Prime Contest - 5th Place Sponsored by: Emile Pinet

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Date: 5/7/2021 2:17:00 PM
Simply sublime,sweet,and superb.see or comment mine please.
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Date: 3/2/2021 10:46:00 PM
This puts me in mind of a haiku that I recently read: ravens smudge the sky ... / eyes averted from feelings / frozen in sorrow ~Sus :))
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Ken Allan Dronsfield
Date: 3/3/2021 7:29:00 PM
Hello Sus, Yes, very poignant and descriptive words indeed. Thank you for sharing my friend (^_^)
Date: 2/4/2021 4:23:00 PM
love your descriptive descent...congratulations Ken :)
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Ken Allan Dronsfield
Date: 2/5/2021 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, David! I appreciate you reading my piece! Take care, Ken
Date: 2/4/2021 3:10:00 PM
such dark imagery Ken, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Ken Allan Dronsfield
Date: 2/5/2021 12:23:00 PM
Hi, Jan! Thanks for reading this piece. Congrats on your win as well! Ken xx
Date: 2/4/2021 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations Ken! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. I was very strict, but your poem rose in the ranks and made the list. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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Ken Allan Dronsfield
Date: 2/4/2021 9:20:00 AM
Emile, my thanks for finding my poem worthy of ranking in your awesome and challenging contest! I'm honored and look forward to submitting again in the future!
Date: 1/13/2021 2:58:00 PM
Dark and delicious writing Ken. Thanks! Linda
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Ken Allan Dronsfield
Date: 1/13/2021 3:32:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Linda!
Date: 1/12/2021 5:42:00 PM
You did quite well with your form, Ken. Good luck in the contest.
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Ken Allan Dronsfield
Date: 1/12/2021 5:45:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Jenna. Good luck as well!
Date: 1/12/2021 10:19:00 AM
Enjoyed the passage through the doors of death...Well done
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Ken Allan Dronsfield
Date: 1/12/2021 5:46:00 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind and generous comment, Arturo!

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