Racket

clucking and cawing like Tarzan’s trees a-warring — plane flees overhead 10/13/2018

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/17/2018 1:33:00 PM

Hah, plane 'flees', clever pun (not sure if it was intentional!)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2018 3:42:00 PM

It was :) Thanks for noticing!

Vegter Papyrus

Date: 10/14/2018 8:56:00 AM

Sounds like you live next door to me. There no such thing as peace and quiet nowadays. If it's not the world, it's the children and grandchildren making noise when they visit.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2018 2:47:00 PM

LOL! For sure!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/14/2018 1:32:00 AM

You have described my yard perfectly, Kim. I called it the "bird tree" last weekend, and a plane went overhead after the three hundred crows left.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2018 7:01:00 AM

It was so noisy yesterday but love it! A poet’s paradise ;)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/13/2018 4:41:00 PM

very descriptive Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2018 5:15:00 PM

Crazy things going on outside! Thanks, Jan!