R and R

R and R

Fan those palm fronds a little faster, boys
As I recline here in dignified poise

I’m Cleopatra, your Egyptian queen
I require the most sumptuous cuisine

Not queen for a day, but for a whole week
Surrounded by tall men with great physiques

Quit your bellyaching, why can’t you grasp
I’m not fated to succumb to an asp

Just provide me with every luxury
Or I’ll send your wives to a nunnery

For seven days I’ll be waited upon
It’s my vacation so I can dream on

Classes I miss and work piles on my desk
As I relax, remaining statuesque

Rest and rehabilitation is grand
On day eight, I’ll respond to your demands


For Carol Brown's "A week to do as I please" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/21/2010 2:37:00 PM
I love how you have great imagery. I love imagery.
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Date: 11/6/2010 6:43:00 AM
well my friend you know how to write excellent peaces thank you once again for sharing duncan
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Date: 10/29/2010 3:43:00 PM
Congrats, Diane. Great write. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 10/28/2010 2:33:00 PM
adorable write, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/28/2010 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest Diane, hope your week is a brilliant one :) Wilma
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Date: 10/28/2010 12:24:00 AM
Diane Congrats on notching 1st place in contest.... Luv/Best wishes .....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/27/2010 5:16:00 PM
A dream made in heaven Diane. Well worthy poem opf top honor. Congratulations with this cute couplet. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/27/2010 2:36:00 PM
OH, I love this one, great imagination, and good luck getting THIS one to go over!! Congratulations, luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/27/2010 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Diane
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Date: 10/27/2010 12:45:00 PM
Congrats Diane on your first place win in Carol's contest with this amazing entry luv.. enjoy your top spot today with your peers with luv..
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Date: 10/27/2010 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations and thank you Diane for taking the time to enter my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2010 9:49:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this excellent write on a great idea..Reads like a winner..I was encouraged by your kind comments on my work..Sara
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Date: 9/30/2010 3:38:00 PM
Dam Girl each one get better and better. More
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Date: 9/29/2010 1:50:00 PM
Wonderful choice of theme Diane. Good luck in Carol's contest >> James
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Date: 9/29/2010 10:07:00 AM
loved it!
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Date: 9/28/2010 9:27:00 PM
Oh, I love this poem and it is a good idea for a vacation away from all the mundane task, Diane!...Love this! Wishing you the best of luck in Carol's contest. Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/28/2010 6:19:00 PM
Even without the exquisite of physique ... O let me fan your right to the throne you recline upon. All the best in the contest
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:43:00 PM
Sounds like the thing Cleo, the queen for a week.I love your flow of thought and wording. One syllable words such as week rhymed with mulitply syllable words like Physiques have a very unique effect in a verse. I try to always do a few of my rhymes in my verses that way. Nice couple, Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:22:00 PM
Playing Cleopatra for a week would be okay too. Great entry. Thanks for your comments on mine. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:16:00 PM
It sounds like you lead a very busy life, Diane, and could really use some R & R. Spending a week living like Cleopatra would be marvelous! Of course, that eighth day comes around and the bubble bursts. LOL Enjoyed your poem and wish you success in Carol's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:15:00 PM
Very cool Diane.. a sweet entry for Carol's contest.. I just entered mine too.. "Twenty-Four/Seven" ... u can still enter my contest.. with a made up story of changing something from the past.. the Nonet form is really easy and so fun to use to write... hope u give my contest a try at least...live in New Jersey... right outside New York City..luv..
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