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Quivering Soft Scream

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    Slowly mine fingers did
     incite her every whim

       This petite darling 
               Smiled 
      as I slid mine digits
               to her 
                hips
     grasping firmly yes I
        to engulf her lips
          to increase her 
     quivering soft scream
 
        as I with passion
               kissed

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Elizabeth Wesley Date: 10/30/2011 4:56:00 PM Yes, one needs to have their pacemaker checked when reading your delightful verse. My addiction is hard to break dear James. Luv, Lizzy Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 12/14/2010 8:01:00 AM How could I have missed this, this......... Fortunately I had my pacemaker checked just the other day. Actually, I didn't make it much beyond the title till I had to stop and catch my breath. A real smoldering scorcher, Sir James. Love, Dave Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/13/2010 7:23:00 AM ooh la la!!! Good one, james! And thanks again for your great comment on my poetry. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 5/10/2010 4:45:00 AM ohhhhhhh lala! You go Jamie! We are all abit in the romantic mood with the Spring all life seeks warmth and increase! Please read Star Clad in Eagerness and Ne'er Gone...Light & Love Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 5/9/2010 9:59:00 PM Very Romantic..and passionate verses.... James..tnks for your kind comments on my work..Charma Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 5/9/2010 7:17:00 PM passionate write! James! thanks for your comments! jimbo Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/9/2010 6:01:00 PM a nice romantic write, enjoyed Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/9/2010 1:05:00 PM Very passionate, James. I hope this type of romance lives on forever. Much love, Carolyn (And I really enjoyed your blog!) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/9/2010 2:21:00 AM Hahaha. very passionate opening Login to Reply