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Quivering Dew Drops

quivering dew drops entrapped in silken cobweb... buzz of a late fly © kashinath karmakar 2011 ====================== Placement: 1st; (Nov.2011) Contest:Very Strict Haiku Sponsor:Charles Henderson By:kashinath karmakar

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/18/2012 2:33:00 PM

congrats Kash on a fantastic third place win luv...

Sarah Mullan

Date: 1/18/2012 1:49:00 PM

Congrats on your winning Kash. Love, Sarah.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/18/2012 11:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your Super win in Brian's "Last Fifty"contest Kash. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/18/2012 9:30:00 AM

Congrats to you, KASH on this phenomenal haiku! Poor lil fly..he is certainly someone's breakfast!! Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/18/2012 8:28:00 AM

you made me drool, kashi.. super congrats on the shining win! :) huggs!

David Williams

Date: 1/18/2012 3:01:00 AM

Kash congrats on your win, I loved this first time around..David

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/17/2012 6:46:00 PM

This serves as a very fine example of how a haiku poem should appear. Congratulations on winning with this entry Kash.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/17/2012 5:50:00 PM

and it wins again for you ;) we've missed YOU...Congrad's Light and Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2012 5:34:00 PM

Congrats on your winning entry in Brian's contest..Sara

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/17/2012 4:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Kash. Elizabeth

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/17/2012 2:53:00 PM

Nice one KK. Congrats on you win with this fine piece.

Bob Quigley

Date: 1/17/2012 2:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Kash

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/8/2011 3:02:00 PM

Love this haiku. Congrats on your win, Kash. Kim

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/8/2011 4:33:00 AM

Awesome Kash, congratulations on your win :)

David Williams

Date: 12/7/2011 11:49:00 AM

Kash congrats on your truly great win..David

Cory Long

Date: 12/7/2011 11:43:00 AM

congrats on your win. cory

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2011 11:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Triplet" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/7/2011 10:56:00 AM

Go Ksah GO!! Great first place win all your effort has sure showed results! Light & Love

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/7/2011 10:49:00 AM

Poor lil fly---sticky trap! Congrats on top flight spot, Kash! I am not surprised at all by this artistic write!

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/7/2011 9:00:00 AM

So creative, Kash....what a great winning haiku! Congratulations!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/16/2011 11:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Strict Haiku contest Kash. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/13/2011 9:57:00 AM

Congrats on winning work..I knew that it was a winner when I read it..Sara

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/11/2011 5:49:00 PM

congrats on a super 1st place haiku, very vivid, I can see the dew drops glistening on the cobweb and hear the buzz of the ensnared fly...

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/11/2011 11:47:00 AM

I really enjoyed this one, Kash :) and you definitely created an Awesome image here, each of your line really rocked :) Way to go for you and Super duper congrats on your first place!! :D

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/11/2011 11:15:00 AM

Hooray! I'm so happy to see your poem in first place, Kash. Love it! Love, Carolyn