Quivering Arrows

You too would hide behind the hood
if you only knew the truth
How heroes where made
in the naughty little Ham
So let us begin the tell of Robin
The quivering arrow of Sherwood
Like the bird his points mostly hit the dirt
or how many a time friar tuck had to duck
and that the merry in Lincoln green’s looked
more like an apple dumpling gang but England
needed fame even if they couldn’t hit a thing
Unlike a deer stagecoaches could be stopped
thus introducing the true shot the woman behind the man
Hidden by the curtain the arrows sing hitting their mark
The lady of May plays distressed and seduction does the rest
So nervous Robin feels like the Don of Nottingham
To steal from the rich and give to the poor the plan
Poor Marion so gifted in an age of man
They would have been caught more than not
by the Sheriff and his men if not for her true aim
as blazing arrows hit their saddles with butts aflame
The shaky quivering arrow gives them the slip
Unbeknownst and it’s funny maid Marion
should be on the throne
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A. Sharma Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 10:15 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this amazing poem John.
Beam Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:05 PM
Thank you Upma
Roper Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 1:21 PM
John, "Quivering Arrows" is wonderful.... Marion rocks...Congratulations on your Robin Hood twisted win!!
Beam Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:05 PM
Thanks, glad you liked it
A   Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 12:39 PM
John, Congratulations on your Robin Hood twisted win. Love LINDA
Beam Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Thanks and congrats on your win
T  Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 11:59 AM
John, Congratulations. CT
Beam Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:07 PM
Thanks CT it was a funny idea for a contest. Thanks again
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January 25, 2016 at 11:31 PM
Thoroughly entertaining! Marvelous phrasing and vibrant imagery. A masterpiece my friend! Best wishes, Keith
White Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 8:27 PM
Very well written . John
Beam Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 9:44 PM
Thanks, Kelli
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