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Quintessentially Is You

~Quintessentially Is You~ "I carry your heart with me( I carry it in my heart) I am never without it(anywhere I go you go . . . " EE Cummings i carry the sweet emotions you stir deep inside of me with your impassioned words exquisite in structure and effervescent flow each to fit perfectly between each line and space to harmonize breathlessly beckoning my soul to explore each aspect of your tenderly crafted verse allowing them to penetrate my being gently to caress my core setting tones your golden pen envisioned encompassing my thoughts conjuring an unequalled burning passion of which is the embodiment that quintessentially is you " Loving the words written from the heart is to love the soul of the author" Date 11/3/2019 Writing Challenge, November- Some Kind of Love Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Pratap Roy

Date: 1/5/2020 10:41:00 PM

Congrats.... Liked the theme and its flow God bless you.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/6/2020 12:14:00 AM

Thank you so much!;)

Eve Roper

Date: 11/19/2019 10:19:00 PM

Many congratulations on your winning placement:-) hugs eve

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/30/2019 4:05:00 PM

Thank you Eve!;)

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 11/19/2019 11:18:00 AM

To quote "words exquisite in structure and effervescent flow" Congrats on a well deserved win.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/30/2019 4:05:00 PM

Thank you so much!;)

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/19/2019 8:18:00 AM

Wow! Congrats. God bless you

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/30/2019 4:05:00 PM

Beata thank you so much!;)

John Gondolf

Date: 11/19/2019 7:10:00 AM

I've always loved the words written from your heart, Bren, Congrats on your win. Hugs, John

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/30/2019 4:05:00 PM

Ah John you are so sweet thank you!;)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/19/2019 5:58:00 AM

Congrats on your podium win Brenda--lovely poem your wrote.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/30/2019 4:04:00 PM

Vijay thank you my friend!;)

Constance La France

Date: 11/18/2019 4:33:00 PM

Brenda, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this emotional write and I love your quote at the bottom too !

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/18/2019 7:40:00 PM

Thank you Dear Heart I really appreciate the 2nd place!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/18/2019 1:52:00 PM

- Congratulations on a lovely 2nd place in the contest, Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/18/2019 7:39:00 PM

Anne-Lise thank you so much!;)

Favour Chimery Etumudo

Date: 11/9/2019 4:07:00 AM

The way the words flow without ceasing,speaks to the depth of your emotion.great poem

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/9/2019 4:14:00 AM

Thank you I appreciate your comment and your read!;)

Curtis Moorman

Date: 11/4/2019 7:53:00 PM

You have the ability to take any topic and make it come to life with new meaning. You are truly amazing, and I think you have a real winner in this poem.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/4/2019 8:19:00 PM

Curtis I think your bias lol! Thank you so much for your warm comment that was so sweet!;)

James Swartz

Date: 11/3/2019 7:08:00 PM

A golden pen indeed Brenda. Very very good poem!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/3/2019 7:43:00 PM

Hahaha! James how are you it has been awhile! Lol so my free verse has improved then? Thank you so very much! You are missed you know! Several people would love to see more of your work!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 11/3/2019 8:39:00 AM

Ahh, the melody is captivating and it has a familiar sound but different voice. I truly love such and cannot get enough of reading. I notice this is for a contest...it sounds like a true winner!!! Good luck....INK

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/3/2019 1:11:00 PM

Thanks so much G that is so sweet of you!! The familiar sound is probably because it's about ones poetry I guess we all can relate to reading another's words and loving them! ! And hopefully it may place!;)B