Brenda Chiri Poet Free verse

Quintessentially Is You

~Quintessentially Is You~

"I carry your heart with me( I carry it in
my heart) I am never without it(anywhere
I go you go . . . "
                             EE Cummings


i carry the sweet emotions 
you stir deep inside of me
with your impassioned 
words exquisite in structure 
and effervescent flow
each to fit perfectly
between each line and space 
to harmonize breathlessly 
beckoning my soul to 
explore each aspect of your 
tenderly crafted verse
allowing them to penetrate 
my being gently to caress
my core setting tones your 
golden pen envisioned
encompassing my thoughts  
conjuring an unequalled burning 
passion of which is the embodiment 
that quintessentially is you

" Loving the words written from the heart is to love the soul of the author"

Date 11/3/2019
Writing Challenge, November- Some Kind of Love 
Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Pratap Roy January 5, 2020 at 10:41 PM Congrats.... Liked the theme and its flow God bless you. Brenda Chiri January 6, 2020 at 12:14 AM Thank you so much!;)

Eve Roper November 19, 2019 at 10:19 PM Many congratulations on your winning placement:-) hugs eve Brenda Chiri November 30, 2019 at 4:05 PM Thank you Eve!;)

D.W. Rodgers November 19, 2019 at 11:18 AM To quote "words exquisite in structure and effervescent flow" Congrats on a well deserved win. Brenda Chiri November 30, 2019 at 4:05 PM Thank you so much!;)

Beata Agustin November 19, 2019 at 8:18 AM Wow! Congrats. God bless you Brenda Chiri November 30, 2019 at 4:05 PM Beata thank you so much!;)

John Gondolf November 19, 2019 at 7:10 AM I've always loved the words written from your heart, Bren, Congrats on your win. Hugs, John Brenda Chiri November 30, 2019 at 4:05 PM Ah John you are so sweet thank you!;)

Vijay Pandit November 19, 2019 at 5:58 AM Congrats on your podium win Brenda--lovely poem your wrote. Brenda Chiri November 30, 2019 at 4:04 PM Vijay thank you my friend!;)

Constance La France November 18, 2019 at 4:33 PM Brenda, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this emotional write and I love your quote at the bottom too ! Brenda Chiri November 18, 2019 at 7:40 PM Thank you Dear Heart I really appreciate the 2nd place!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen November 18, 2019 at 1:52 PM - Congratulations on a lovely 2nd place in the contest, Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Brenda Chiri November 18, 2019 at 7:39 PM Anne-Lise thank you so much!;)

Favour Chimery Etumudo November 9, 2019 at 4:07 AM The way the words flow without ceasing,speaks to the depth of your emotion.great poem Brenda Chiri November 9, 2019 at 4:14 AM Thank you I appreciate your comment and your read!;)

Curtis Moorman November 4, 2019 at 7:53 PM You have the ability to take any topic and make it come to life with new meaning. You are truly amazing, and I think you have a real winner in this poem. Brenda Chiri November 4, 2019 at 8:19 PM Curtis I think your bias lol! Thank you so much for your warm comment that was so sweet!;)

James Swartz November 3, 2019 at 7:08 PM A golden pen indeed Brenda. Very very good poem! Brenda Chiri November 3, 2019 at 7:43 PM Hahaha! James how are you it has been awhile! Lol so my free verse has improved then? Thank you so very much! You are missed you know! Several people would love to see more of your work!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script November 3, 2019 at 8:39 AM Ahh, the melody is captivating and it has a familiar sound but different voice. I truly love such and cannot get enough of reading. I notice this is for a contest...it sounds like a true winner!!! Good luck....INK Brenda Chiri November 3, 2019 at 1:11 PM Thanks so much G that is so sweet of you!! The familiar sound is probably because it's about ones poetry I guess we all can relate to reading another's words and loving them! ! And hopefully it may place!;)B

Ts Poetry November 3, 2019 at 7:28 AM Powerful stuff B Brenda Chiri November 3, 2019 at 7:45 AM Well don't wear yourself out chatting T lmao! Thanks!;)

Arturo Michael November 3, 2019 at 6:34 AM And What a Soul do you possess.... a wonder by itself...Nice one Brenda Chiri November 3, 2019 at 6:41 AM Arturo thank you so much for your wonderful comment!;)

Regina Mcintosh November 3, 2019 at 6:29 AM Beautiful and I love the quote. Bless you always with many more beautiful poems. Love to you, Gina Brenda Chiri November 3, 2019 at 6:40 AM Regina lol thank you for your warm comment again today! Humbled again my friend!;)