Quietude and Boom

I decorate a grotto for you, Mama where orchids and holy images embellish this special place and day, that saintly icons guard you there as if they beg me to be released from years of guilty devotion… Yet I polish their laced clothes; then end the night waiting for wind chimes to knell,’ Magnificat.’ Scenes from younger days resound, while you, Mama, gift me with love and hate flickering through my confused mind : And sharpened bells ring in my ears; the gong of your voice banging across the hall... yet I still recall, mouth so tender, droning lullabies in the soft of window sills, ‘Magnificat’… How can I reconcile quietude and boom, when the little girl in me longs for your timber here beside this special place-- till holy statues listen to my own chimes and finally, understand this adoration. I Cannot Believe I Wrote That Poetry For Nina Parmenter Written 8/1/2015 Re-post 12/5/2018
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Gist Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 8:37 PM
A wonderful Mom! I have one as well!
Inman Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:46 AM
How you can pick a poem from your incredible work to represent your 'best' is beyond me Nette. Everything you write impresses me. This is deeply touching.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 7:53 PM
This is very beautiful Nette. It has a flow like a song, yet it is free verse. I love it. A fav for me. Congratulations. Sorry it took me so long to find this gem.
Grasso Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 7:38 AM
A beautiful poem to read, Nette. Congratulations! ...Fran
Leiser Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 9:05 AM
Beautifully written poem, Nette! Congrats on your win :)
Martin Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 4:07 PM
Both moving and haunting - excellent poem! Congrats! :-)
Hamilton Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 8:40 AM
Beautiful Nette, just wonderful
Daniel Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 8:18 AM
Beautiful, Nette:) congratulations on your win:)
White Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 4:19 AM
Nette, that is a wonderful poem, and it so deserves to the placement :) THIS in particular: "How can I reconcile quietude and boom,// when the little girl in me longs for your// lithe timber within that special place," Beautiful
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 9:04 PM
a truly WOW poem you entered, Nette. BIG congrats It truly is one of your best!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 11:29 AM
Beautiful opening verses. Sings with sounds of sinner and saint! Congrats, Nette! Love it!
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December 16, 2016 at 11:11 AM
nette you made me cry , anyone who as lost a loved one knows the pain congrats on your win stephen
Smith Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Congratulations Nette :)
Roper Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 9:50 AM
Nette, this is so very heartfelt and so moving <3 congratulations on your very best, but I do know you have s-o m-a-n-y more Hugs Eve
Kimathi Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 7:46 AM
Hi Nette. Congrats for your placement with this wonderful piece of work!!! ;-)
Smith Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 2:34 PM
Congratulations, outstanding win Nette...
A. Sharma Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 10:59 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write nette..l
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 8:49 PM
this must be third time for me to see this. LOVE it again, Nette, and big congrats for your well deserved win.
Mcclain Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 7:18 PM
Hi Nette, Congrats on your win with this touching poem about devotion to your mother. Beautifully written. Cheers, Brian
May Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 2:33 PM
Beautiful write with a heartfelt sentiment...Congrats on your top win...
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April 20, 2016 at 12:33 PM
Beautiful win with beautiful poem my lovely friend. A great congrats. Loved always, bl
Scars Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 11:52 AM
Nette, beautiful!!congrats on your top placement!-luloo
Allison Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 2:15 AM
Dropping back again with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2015 at 2:02 AM
I think I saw this before. and really loved it. Well, Nette, I feel silly. the other day I asked about your contest and now i realize what you are wanting from us. I confused taste and touch. I was thinking you were asking people who had not won with their "touch" poems to resubmit them. I was SO OFF. NOw I totally get what your contest is. Sorry I bothered you about that.
Basnett Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 4:35 AM
Lovely writeup,congratulations on poem of the week :)
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