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Quietness in the Shadows

There’s a quietness in the shadows.
A lonely place where sadness grows.
A place in time where my mind goes.
Thoughts and memories are my foes.

But I have learned to not resist,
for when I do, they just persist.
I used to fight; I’d clinch my fist.
Shadow boxing, I always missed.

Meditating on dark and light,
it came to me I shouldn’t fight.
Brightest light or dark as the night,
their contrast gives us better sight.

The reason for simplicity,
to deal with life’s complexity.
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Velasco Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 7:59 PM
I really appreciate the balance in this poem, the way it turns struggle into reflection. I love how it shows that even in darkness, there’s insight and growth, and that contrast teaches us clarity and simplicity. Very moving.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 1:38 AM
Don't let thoughts and memories trouble you. The past is gone and best forgotten. Life will always have dark or light.
Narain Avatar
September 10, 2025 at 9:44 AM
Good advice.
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