Quiet Pier’s Lament

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Written: May 08, 2025, for contest by Brian Strand. Art "Sitting at the Dock of the Bay' Oil, Plein Air Series, by Michelle Held. My Poem titled "Quiet Pier’s Lament" was written using this artwork as its inspiration. It's better to read the poem while looking at this artwork. *********** seagulls fly to the sky over broken planks and rusty nails searching for what has been lost they sift through seashells and sand scavenging for leftovers as I look for traces of you river drips its brown-blue hues at low tide. I hear the water hum and cries of birds as I search for you among grains of sand at the end of rickety pier a girl stands on one leg, arms stretched wide balancing ~ as quiet as a breath ` patient as death her pterodactyl thoughts soar on the sunlit wings of pelicans or plunge into the depths the strong bodies of eels this life, a feeble pier anchored by shallow utility poles cut into thirds, like hot dogs still hovers over a muddy bank with each storm, new scars appear the wind is gusting left and right weakening what I hoped would endure crushing under the weight of every fresh verse now it's a relic, floorboards askew washed away by relentless waves with nothing to hold up my old desires my thoughts drift away each night yet, each month I sit in the same stiff chair struggling to share anything new All I am is an aging pier with gulls perched on my rotting posts

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Date: 5/11/2025 1:40:00 PM
I am back to behold this beautiful poem. So you won a contest with this, it doesn't surprise me. What a wistful, breathtaking piece it is -
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Date: 5/10/2025 9:07:00 AM
Back with congratulations dear poet with your win in this poetry contest with a lovely poem crafted with your exquisite pen-brush. Wish you a pleasant weekend.
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Date: 5/10/2025 7:41:00 AM
SP, this is a great description of devastation. This is something I've held onto for part of my life, so I understand it completely. It resonates, and I am just glad that I can look at the pier and think how the poor soul would be much better off if just able to let the past go and move on. We just exist and all that has come before and during our lives fades. It's quite had to leave the past in the appropriate place. Smiles!!
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Date: 5/9/2025 9:31:00 AM
Excellent poe, Lasaad! Great imagery in a thoughtful poem.
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Date: 5/9/2025 9:22:00 AM
This is going into my favs, Sotto. Breathtaking tone used in this - "a girl stands on one leg, arms stretched wide balancing ~ as quiet as a breath ` patient as death" almost apart from time, those lines
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Date: 5/8/2025 7:36:00 PM
Great imagery, Lasaad! … scavenging for leftovers as I look for traces of you…eapecially love last three verses!
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