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Quiet Hours

It’s so quiet now, no more noise coming from upstairs All of the background sounds have faded into the mist Radio silent dawn ... each morning — once rambling chatter now only dead air Audio spikes of serene quietude, no more voices that are rude yammering late Turn the open sign, shut the entrance gate and pull down the shade Switch on the black mood UV light and drift away Don’t know how long it’s been since the accident, can’t remember, but that is good Memory flashes like a receding pulsar star, faint blips on a radar screen It’s so very quiet now, such peaceful quiet time Head now filled with relaxing cosmic void, listening to the music of the spheres — minus-zero vibration decibels The brain waves are so calm everyday, life is like a tranquil, pastoral haze Faces rotate around and move about It’s as if they’re saying: let them out, or let who out? Either way, their pantomime voices trail off ... float into space ... It’s the oddest thing, never knowing what day is today It’s gotten really quiet now, even for ears that stay plugged with mild catatonic gauze It’s always quiet hours for me, so peaceful and serene I only hear any noise, when I go to sleep and dream restless dreams ... distant dreams that silver project silhouette images of a lost life before

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Date: 7/1/2017 11:22:00 AM
I don't know if I'm unusual but I like quite hours a lot.
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Date: 6/30/2017 5:59:00 AM
Nice work. Quiet hour sometimes a busy hour to think
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Date: 6/29/2017 9:19:00 AM
We yearn for quiet hours but then they become too quiet.
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Date: 6/28/2017 7:52:00 PM
Ahh, finally a quite moment :) although a house without noise can be lonely and sad, but a peace of a mind is so relaxing. Lovely write my friend. Hugs :)
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Date: 6/28/2017 10:54:00 AM
The old house is a lonely place full of echoes of laughter and sobs of children. The music is the remedy. It has the power to heal. I feel your sadness in this write, Freddie. I can relate!
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Date: 6/28/2017 9:48:00 AM
This is so deep and sad, yet pulls the reader in with every single line Freddie. Your writing is amazing :) Have a nice day.
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Date: 6/28/2017 9:47:00 AM
Freddie this is a very deep poem - I feel you are describing the sad loss of memory through an unfortunate incident or dementia? Either way, I have seen this in reality and your poem is sad...Maria
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