Quiet

alone in my backyard
in total silence
seems so surreal

the humming of
homebound traffic
far in the background
while songs of birds
are all I hear

not a soul in sight
the world surely
is on pause



Published in my photo/poetry book ~PEONIES~ 2019
Also published in photo/anthology ~GATEKEEPER~ 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2023, Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Proxenos Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 11:56 AM
a serene poem Line - relaxing, and enjoyable - birdlife in your back garden, so wonderful - hugs Jennifer.
Gauthier Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 12:36 PM
Thanks, Jennifer, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Poetry Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 7:41 AM
I believe quiet is the best state of nature, only sound os birds singing, rivers running not the traffic of the citeis... instants of pureness like you poem Line, salute alkas
Gauthier Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 8:23 AM
Thank you for your lovely visit, Alkas. We certainly do need more communion with nature and pause in our life.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 9:19 PM
I was there this morning except I heard roosters, and then an airplane. Thanks for the memory, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 9:53 PM
Awesome.
Sands Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 4:43 PM
I can relate to this one. Well done ! :)
Gauthier Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 5:46 PM
Thanks, Heidi.
Rose  Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 4:39 PM
Sometimes we like it that way but at other times we welcome a voice , I love the peace this brings Line, xo
Gauthier Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 5:46 PM
Thank you, Pixie.
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