Quiescent

That's so nice to hear Paulette, quiescent really was the ideal word to fashion my verse around, cheers David

Thank you Karen for stopping by, puppy love the awakening, cheers David

Heya Susan, I was surprised this one went down so well, it was my first crush, the day before girls where just friends in the schoolyard, a light must've switched on overnight lol, cheers David

Heya Kim, that old devil called puppy love hit me hard, a moment to remember, or perhaps one I'll never forget, cheers David

Heya Sam, I do try if possible to stretch words to there limits, sometimes works if I can counterbalance them with a theme, alas can miserably fail as well, thank you so much for stopping by cheers David

Thank you Alexis, It really did feel like I was dreaming that day, never interacted or touched, but it was a moment in time, cheers David

Thank you so much Vijay, for kind comments, I'm delighted to get potd, cheers David

Thank you Rama, A wonderful almost ethereal feeling, one that can only be truly experienced, by living it, cheers David

Heya Brandy, I was only 12 or 13, so wasn't sure what I was feeling, puppy love perhaps, but even now all those years later, the memory is pretty powerful, you wrote the book on these type of poems, and for it to catch your attention is touching indeed, thank you for stopping by, cheers David

Thank you so much Heidi, I'm really delighted you love my little verse, and delighted you took the time to pop in with congrats, cheers David

Heya Paula, the simple things in life can be the most beautiful and perplexing, thank you so much for dropping in with congrats, I'm delighted with potd cheers David

Thank you Gershon, I know it's not my usual style, but hey I was human once lol, cheers David

Never seen her coming Gary, it really was first attraction, like a switch in my brain was triggered, some moments do stay with us forever, cheers David

Thank you Joseph, for taking time to stop by with congrats, cheers David

Heya Belle, I was besotted at the time, and didn't know why, thank you for stopping by, cheers David

Heya Mark, this one wrote itself without much effort, still surprises me it got potd, cheers David

Thank you so much Mala, I'm really delighted with potd, cheers David

Hello Ken, your so right it was beautiful, but at the same time baffling, thank you for dropping by cheers David

Heya Eve, quite a big surprise to get potd and a placement, but I am delighted, thank you for stopping by, cheers David

Heya Mike, thank you so much, sometimes these simple but complex experiences in life say more, cheers David

Thank you Demetrios for stopping by with kind words, this is a joy and a surprise to receive potd, cheers David

Thank you Milton, I was honestly thinking a placement in the contest would be great, but to get potd as well, is brilliant, cheers David

You sum up the girl in my poem Jeanne she was simply beautiful, My first crush, cheers David

Makes it all the sweeter Constance doing the double, totally unexpected too, thank you for your kind comments and placement in your contest, cheers David

Out of nowhere Super Mo, she skipped into my innocent world, the day before I barely noticed girls they where just friends at school, cheers David