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Quiescent

You drifted into my ambience, on a light summers breeze I'd never seen such perfection, carried with so much ease We barely interacted, though our eyes may just have met Quiescently touching my heart, a moment I'll never forget By David Kavanagh

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Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 10/27/2021 1:15:00 PM

David, the depth and breath of your piece delivers the meaning of quiescent! Lovely! Blessings, Paulette

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/27/2021 2:37:00 PM

That's so nice to hear Paulette, quiescent really was the ideal word to fashion my verse around, cheers David

Karen Jones

Date: 10/20/2021 1:03:00 AM

Such a sweet tender emotion this poem inspires

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/20/2021 2:19:00 AM

Thank you Karen for stopping by, puppy love the awakening, cheers David

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/18/2021 10:48:00 AM

Dear David, dreamy beauty spills from your romantic pen with elegance and flair. I see double congrats are in order, for your win in Constance’s contest and for POTD honors. Bravo, my friend! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/18/2021 10:58:00 AM

Heya Susan, I was surprised this one went down so well, it was my first crush, the day before girls where just friends in the schoolyard, a light must've switched on overnight lol, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/14/2021 9:00:00 AM

Quiescently touching my heart…this lovely POTD! Congratulations!

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/14/2021 11:03:00 AM

Heya Kim, that old devil called puppy love hit me hard, a moment to remember, or perhaps one I'll never forget, cheers David

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/12/2021 10:19:00 AM

David, I love the inventive ways you use words to create memorable images that carry your poem's theme. Congratulations on your win and high fives for your POTD!

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/12/2021 12:14:00 PM

Heya Sam, I do try if possible to stretch words to there limits, sometimes works if I can counterbalance them with a theme, alas can miserably fail as well, thank you so much for stopping by cheers David

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/7/2021 9:51:00 AM

WoW! David, I don't know how I missed this well-written write. I found it to be dreamy and romantic. Congratulations on your win in the contest and for getting the poem of the day. Both accolades we're deserved- Alexis

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/7/2021 10:33:00 AM

Thank you Alexis, It really did feel like I was dreaming that day, never interacted or touched, but it was a moment in time, cheers David

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/6/2021 3:00:00 AM

BIG congrats on POTD David. Much enjoyed this write. So well written!

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/6/2021 3:31:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay, for kind comments, I'm delighted to get potd, cheers David

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 10/6/2021 1:15:00 AM

A wonderful feeling captured in just 4 lines. Amazing poem. Congratulations on your well deserved Potd. Enjoy the honour.

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/6/2021 1:31:00 AM

Thank you Rama, A wonderful almost ethereal feeling, one that can only be truly experienced, by living it, cheers David

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/5/2021 8:15:00 PM

A touch... without touching. Yes, it certainly is possible. Love is such a beautiful emotion indeed. This is so dreamy and romantic. Congratulations David, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/5/2021 8:43:00 PM

Heya Brandy, I was only 12 or 13, so wasn't sure what I was feeling, puppy love perhaps, but even now all those years later, the memory is pretty powerful, you wrote the book on these type of poems, and for it to catch your attention is touching indeed, thank you for stopping by, cheers David

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/5/2021 2:19:00 PM

I love this POTD. Congratulations :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/5/2021 2:28:00 PM

Thank you so much Heidi, I'm really delighted you love my little verse, and delighted you took the time to pop in with congrats, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/5/2021 12:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your potd win. A "Beautiful" write. I love it. Have a blessed day...............

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/5/2021 12:50:00 PM

Heya Paula, the simple things in life can be the most beautiful and perplexing, thank you so much for dropping in with congrats, I'm delighted with potd cheers David

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/5/2021 12:35:00 PM

Absolutely Qweat, David! lol. Congrats on POTD. ~ gw

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/5/2021 12:47:00 PM

Thank you Gershon, I know it's not my usual style, but hey I was human once lol, cheers David

Gary Radice

Date: 10/5/2021 12:09:00 PM

And it's congrats. from me. You've captured the essence of first attraction brilliantly. Cheers - Gary

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/5/2021 12:23:00 PM

Never seen her coming Gary, it really was first attraction, like a switch in my brain was triggered, some moments do stay with us forever, cheers David

Joseph May

Date: 10/5/2021 11:48:00 AM

Congrats on POTD David..

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/5/2021 12:19:00 PM

Thank you Joseph, for taking time to stop by with congrats, cheers David

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/5/2021 11:44:00 AM

Such beautiful words David, a well deserved poem of the day… Belle

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/5/2021 12:15:00 PM

Heya Belle, I was besotted at the time, and didn't know why, thank you for stopping by, cheers David

Mark Koplin

Date: 10/5/2021 11:36:00 AM

That is awesome! Congratulations on potd!

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/5/2021 12:18:00 PM

Heya Mark, this one wrote itself without much effort, still surprises me it got potd, cheers David

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/5/2021 11:34:00 AM

Wow! So beautiful! Congratulations on your POTD. BW ~ Mala

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/5/2021 12:13:00 PM

Thank you so much Mala, I'm really delighted with potd, cheers David

Ken Rone

Date: 10/5/2021 10:28:00 AM

A great entry. Capturing a beautiful experience. Congratulations. - Ken

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/5/2021 10:53:00 AM

Hello Ken, your so right it was beautiful, but at the same time baffling, thank you for dropping by cheers David

Eve Roper

Date: 10/5/2021 9:54:00 AM

Wonderful write, David, congratulations on your win in Constance contest and being POTD.

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/5/2021 10:49:00 AM

Heya Eve, quite a big surprise to get potd and a placement, but I am delighted, thank you for stopping by, cheers David

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/5/2021 9:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD for this beautiful poem!!

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/5/2021 10:47:00 AM

Heya Mike, thank you so much, sometimes these simple but complex experiences in life say more, cheers David

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/5/2021 8:01:00 AM

Elegantly beautiful! Congratulation on POTD, my friend, David!

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/5/2021 8:41:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios for stopping by with kind words, this is a joy and a surprise to receive potd, cheers David

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/5/2021 8:00:00 AM

David - CONGRATULATIONS on your P. O. T. D. Your poem is beautiful and well-written. Much-deserved.

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/5/2021 8:38:00 AM

Thank you Milton, I was honestly thinking a placement in the contest would be great, but to get potd as well, is brilliant, cheers David

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 10/5/2021 7:46:00 AM

Simple and beautiful. Congrats on your POTD

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/5/2021 8:36:00 AM

You sum up the girl in my poem Jeanne she was simply beautiful, My first crush, cheers David

Constance La France

Date: 10/5/2021 7:10:00 AM

David, congratulations for your win in my Q contest, beautiful writing and another congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy each honor ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/5/2021 8:33:00 AM

Makes it all the sweeter Constance doing the double, totally unexpected too, thank you for your kind comments and placement in your contest, cheers David

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 10/5/2021 6:30:00 AM

You blow me away Super Dave. Potent little big penning, congratulations on POTD! xomo

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/5/2021 6:56:00 AM

Out of nowhere Super Mo, she skipped into my innocent world, the day before I barely noticed girls they where just friends at school, cheers David