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We stood, On some wood, As good as we could, To watch the short flick in the dark. And the light, It was bright, On this dim movie night, As we stood all alone in the park. And the movie, That we, Both got to see, About two lovers on a plank on the ground, Showed each of them stand, Then sink holding hands, On quicksand, With nobody else around.

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