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Quick Sand Build Your Own Sand

Sinking Deeper and Deeper Into a Pit Of brilliant Gloom Once Secured In my Mother`s Gentle womb Within becomes Without Causing little Doubt I need to Shout Help me Out Before my impending Doom Richard Ferry 9/11/2013

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2013 10:02:00 PM

Coming here to say hi, I wonder if you have any poems I have not seen. I will try to look a bit and see!!

Richard Ferry
Date: 10/10/2013 11:55:00 PM

Hello Andrea My writes are not as polished as yours by any means..I just put down thoughts in my own style and submit to Soup..Tell the truth..Never spend more than ten minutes or so putting something down on paper..Sometimes I get lucky and I receive praise from fellow soupers....Just wanted to thank you again for following my thoughts..Your fellow souper and friend Rick

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2013 1:09:00 AM

very interesting one. I rather like this, Richard. It has a deeper meaning than most I am seeing.

Richard Ferry
Date: 9/14/2013 4:06:00 PM

I know You see the futility in this one