Quick Change

QUICK CHANGE We’ve shared a lot the two of us The nine months we’ve been one I’ve joggled you and you’ve kicked me But now our visits done. And I wonder as I look at you In one second change my life To know I am your mother And no longer just a wife. Barbara Barry-Nishanian Oct.5, 1973

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FJ Thomas

Date: 1/29/2018 12:17:00 PM

This says so very much Barbara. So very beautiful :)

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 1/28/2018 3:47:00 AM

You are writing beautiful stories, that's what you are doing. Such a special moment that moment when you are alone, holding your baby for the first time, looking into their eyes. I hope your child/children, no matter how old, read your stories. Much Love to you Barbara, Leanne

Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 7/16/2019 11:36:00 PM

I just saw you commented. I am so sorry not thanking you before. I have a question, for you and anyone else. You mentioned I wrote STORIES... Can poetry be presented as little stories? What other terms appropriate? Friend doesn't like to read poetry, so say's doesn't want to read

Silent One

Date: 1/25/2018 5:51:00 PM

Wow 80.... and still writing so well!

Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 1/25/2018 8:34:00 PM

Motherhood inspired..Not still writing...started this past fall. I don't know what to call how I write? Not poetry like you and serious writers. I ramble..don't like term ramblings...You and any others I am open to how to describe my silly and serious stuff.

Silent One

Date: 1/24/2018 10:00:00 AM

Awww all the way back in 1973, I wonder how your child has grown.. I was not born till 3 years later..

Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 1/25/2018 2:35:00 AM

He'll be 45 in Sept. I'll be a young feisty vivacious 80.. whoopee! Poems been scared to share..so thanks again for encouragement.