Quetzal

Quetzal Queen of the rainforest Quaffed in neon or gold Quick to zoom through jungles Quivering calls for mates Quiet, shy, dancing tails Quirky nests in treetops Quetzal, cloud forest charm

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Terry Flood

Date: 10/2/2023 3:12:00 PM

You sure nailed that Quetzal, Sam. Funny thing is, I had apparently mis-filed Quetzal and couldn’t think what one was. You stuck a pin in my brain and I’ve now re-filed it under ‘Q’ alongside ‘Zebra’… oh, damn it. ;-). Congrats

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/30/2023 9:48:00 AM

My Dearest Rhyme Time Friend, you captured the enchantment and beauty of this rainforest queen with your magical poetic finesse. Your golden pen glows with superb imagery. Every poetic line as brilliant as the gemstone colors of this quintessential bird. My heartiest congratulations to you, my sweet poetry sis, for your wonderful win. Your pleiades flows as gracefully as the quetzal's "dancing tail". Warmest wishes and hugs sent on misty breezes.. ~Susan

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/29/2023 11:29:00 AM

Congratulations, Sam, on your well-deserved win! Your poem is truly enchanting, filled with captivating imagery and an intriguing portrayal of a mesmerizing creature. The words flow seamlessly, like a gentle breeze rustling through a forest of blooming flowers. Each line is meticulously crafted, painting vivid pictures in the reader's mind.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/28/2023 11:36:00 AM

A charming poem, about a fascinating creature. Beautifully written! Congratulations on your win, Sam. :)

Terry Miller

Date: 9/27/2023 7:30:00 AM

I wasn't going to take the Q on, but you did, and an excellent write; congratulations

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/27/2023 10:10:00 AM

Hi Terry! Thank you so much. While "q" was a challenging letter to work with, learned some new words and had fun weaving them together in tribute of this beautiful bird! So glad you enjoyed my efforts! Cheers and blessings to you!

Joseph May

Date: 9/27/2023 6:15:00 AM

Very nicely done Sam, Congrats on your win

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/27/2023 10:08:00 AM

Thanks so much, Joseph! Not only was it fun to learn about the Quetzal, but had fun playing with "q" words! So grateful for my placement and your sponsorship of this contest! Blessings to you!

Paige Hind

Date: 9/26/2023 2:42:00 PM

I liked this!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/26/2023 8:27:00 PM

Had fun with this one, Paige. Thank you! Glad you liked it! Blessings!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/25/2023 4:22:00 PM

Amazing use of the 'q'. I'm impressed...isn't the Quetzel the national bird of Guatemala? I've never seen one but your Pleiades offers a fine description. Well done!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/26/2023 8:25:00 PM

I believe the Quetzel is the national bird of Guatemala. It is a beautiful bird with an amazing tail. Have to admit "Q" was a challenge but a fun challenge in the end. Thank you for visiting and such a lovely compliment! Blessings of beauty to you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/22/2023 12:34:00 PM

If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/22/2023 12:49:00 PM

Hi Sara! Thank you for your encouraging feedback. The letter "q" proved to be an engaging challenge but with a satisfying result! Hope you are well. Continued prayers and blessings!

Silent One

Date: 9/22/2023 8:14:00 AM

I had not heard about this bird until your poem. You used the theme very well and the letter P exquisitely. Great choice of words, you inspire me to write one...

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/22/2023 11:26:00 AM

I, too, was not aware of this exquisite little jungle dweller that can fly at 60 mph and has amazing, luminescent plumage. Their flowing tails add to their unique beauty! True avian treasures! Thank you for your uplifting feedback. Turns out the letter "q" was a challenge but one I enjoyed. Can't wait to see your pleiades. I know it will be special. Sending you blessings of inspiration!

Bill Baker

Date: 9/21/2023 4:11:00 PM

Informative Pleiades, Sam. Great imagery. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/22/2023 11:20:00 AM

Hi Bill! It was so much fun to learn about this exquisite little bird! Glad you enjoyed the imagery. Was fun to create! The Quetzal is so beautiful - almost like a visual poem in flight. Hope you are well! Blessings!

Lin Lane

Date: 9/21/2023 2:53:00 PM

This is as colorfully charming as the Quetzal. I've seen pictures and they are amazing! Great entry, Sam.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/22/2023 11:17:00 AM

Hi Lin! I was mesmerized by the colorful beauty of this tiny bird. I agree! They are amazing not only in their colored plumage but they mate for life and are some of the fastest flyers on earth achieving speeds of 60 mph! I'm so glad you enjoyed my attempt to put this bird into a pleiades! Thank you for your positive wishes! Blessings!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/21/2023 2:38:00 PM

The beautiful Quetzal, a wonderful Pleiades Sam… Belle

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/21/2023 2:45:00 PM

Thank you so much Belle. I wasn't familiar with this beautiful bird with the dancing tail. So fun to learn about its beauty! Blessings!