Questions Unanswered

Lightning flashes and the rain falls
as the storm rages on tonight,
the family is so worried about you
and wanting to know you're alright.

Late, last Sunday afternoon
you tried to take your own life,
twice with the same medication
that was supposed to end your strife.

You were taken away and we don't 
even know where you are right now,
but everyone is just hoping
that you can comeback somehow.

What ever happened to you,
that caring person you once were,
who could always make me laugh
oh, how I do remember her.

You took care of me when
I needed someone to be there,
so many good memories flash back
of the fun times we would share.

We are all still wondering why
you are suffering in depression,
and how could you ever hurt us
with such unexpected aggression.

You left your teenage son
alone in a state of panic and fear,
now we can only wish and wait
for some kind of real cure.




I wrote this after my aunt tried to commit suicide last Sunday, June 15th. 
Thankfully, she was not successful. She has been struggling with depression
for about 10 years and this is the worst state that we've ever seen her in.
Our family and the doctors keep trying to help her, but nothing has worked yet.
So, we will have to wait and see where things go from here, as we still have no
word on her current condition.

We are not a religious family, but it might help if you could send out your 
positive thoughts, and maybe keep us in your prayers during this difficult
and confusing time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 10/3/2014 6:43:00 PM
my prayers are with you kelly excellent piece pf writing dear friend
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/8/2014 1:56:00 AM
Thank you for your kind thoughts and prayers, dear friend. My family and I appreciate them very much.... My aunt is now home from the hospital and doing better. We do hope that her current condition will continue to improve.
Date: 8/11/2014 12:03:00 PM
Oh, wow ! This definitely struck a chord. My baby sis attempted the same about thirty years ago. You do have my prayers. Kelly, for what they're worth. There's no getting over such a tragedy.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/15/2014 1:03:00 AM
Thank you for your kind thoughts and prayers, Keith. My family and I appreciate it very much. I'm sorry to hear about your baby sis.... Our family has been trying to move forward with a positive outlook, but we don't think that this sad situation has passed just yet.
Date: 8/10/2014 9:20:00 AM
This piece really hit home for me, SP. I tried to kill myself 7 years ago with an overdose of barbiturates. Thanks for sharing this powerful poem <3
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/13/2014 12:30:00 AM
You're welcome, BP. Thank you so much for commenting on this poem. I had thoughts of suicide when I was a teenager, but I never attempted it. I'm just thankful that neither one of us, or my aunt, were successful. My family and I are moving forward now. Though it is still a shock that this even happened. We never saw it coming.
Date: 7/6/2014 12:43:00 PM
Kelly, my dear friend, I am so sorry that you and your family are experiencing this kind of pain. My thoughts and prayers are with you all during this time of difficulty and confusion. Thank you for sharing this very touching, personal write and I congratulate you on your definitely well-deserved win. Warmest regards and best wishes.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/11/2014 8:16:00 PM
Thank you for your kind thoughts and prayers, Pandita. My family and I appreciate it so much!.... This past month has been a difficult one for us, but we are getting through it together.... My aunt is doing much better today, and my family and I are hoping that this will be a new start and a positive beginning for her. She has many more years yet to live, and so much to live for.
Date: 7/6/2014 1:55:00 AM
A very reat and touching dedication poem this is my dear friend Kelly. Sending you all my love, thoughts and esp. prayers that everything will gonna be alright soon esp. with your aunt. Many hugs to all! And, congratulations for this stunning write and win! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/11/2014 8:02:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind thoughts and prayers, Leonora. My family and I appreciate it very much....My aunt is doing much better now, and we hope that she will gain a more positive outlook from here on out. She has so much to live for.... Big hugs :)
Date: 7/5/2014 5:53:00 AM
Kelly beautifully penned desperate condition! Medication really does help ,, u hv to ensure compliance dear ! God bless her always ! Congrats on win !
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/10/2014 1:25:00 AM
Thank you for the nice comments and the kind congrats, Dr. Upma!.... I agree, medication does help when taken in the correct way. My aunt is doing better and she has been prescribed a new medication. My family and I are hoping that it will help her.
Date: 7/5/2014 12:34:00 AM
Terrible and sad emotions, kelly and congrats on the win
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/10/2014 1:13:00 AM
Thank you for the kind congrats, Dr. Ram.... My aunt is doing better now, and she has been prescribed a new medication that we hope will help.
Date: 7/4/2014 11:00:00 PM
Aww! this is good and hope all will be ok...Congratulations
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/10/2014 1:04:00 AM
Thank you for the nice comments and the kind congrats, Litan!.... She is doing better now, and has been prescribed a new medication that hopefully will help her.
Date: 7/4/2014 10:34:00 AM
Kelly,, Congratulations, thank you EVER SO SO much... Keep Enjoying my contest, and my latest blog "Some Poems Are:" if you like. See you around, :) LINDA
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Date: 6/24/2014 9:29:00 PM
Kelly; This is sad. It brings back memories. I tried to do that once when I was very young. I tried to jump from a second story window. If I had - I would not have the family I have today. I will pray for her. Prayer has a lot of power. Many blessings.... Lucilla
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/26/2014 5:36:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind thoughts and prayers, Lucilla.... When I was a teenager, I had thoughts of suicide, but I never attempted it. I think poetry is what saved my life, because it was the one thing that allowed me to express my feelings, and it has lead to better things for me.
Date: 6/22/2014 7:33:00 PM
Oh Kelly this is terrible, I do hope your Aunt recovers, depression is a shocking thing, I was depressed for a while when Pete walked out on me but never at the point of killing myself, please tell her we are all thinking of her and be positive my dear, love to her and you Take care............Vera..................
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/25/2014 3:47:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words, Vera. My family and I really appreciate it. I will let my Aunt know that she has many people who care about her. She is doing much better, but it looks like she may need to remain in the hospital for awhile.
Date: 6/21/2014 4:50:00 PM
sorry to hear this, kelly.. i send white light and prayers for her healing.. this is superbly written!.. huggs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/25/2014 12:51:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind thoughts and prayers, Nette. My family and I really appreciate it. Hugs!
Date: 6/20/2014 12:43:00 AM
I am so sorry to hear what happened. I wish you nothing but the best from Toronto. I only have shared two pieces of writing and this is only my second comment i have made. Please let me know what you think of my poems, I would appreciate your thoughts.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/23/2014 10:39:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Hani. My aunt is doing better now, but she may have stay in the hospital for awhile.... Of course I will read your poems, Hani. I would be happy to!
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