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Quote : “In our quest for the answers of life we tend to make order out of chaos, and chaos out of order.” – Jeffrey Fry In the quest of life, I ponder days long past, Sweet memories linger, love's echoes cast. Dreaming of romance, hearts closely bound, Ignoring the bitter, where rifts were found. A dream world unfolds, affection's embrace, A haven where complaints find no firm place. A paradise of love, smiles intertwined, In a realm where sweet accord is enshrined. Yet present days unfold with hurdles dire, Obstacles rising, like mountains entire. Reality's grip, emotions held so tight, Struggling with differences, shadows in sight. In this complex dance of future and past, I dwell, seeking warmth that will ever last. Living each day, hope within my breast, A quest for grace, in life's eternal quest.

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Date: 2/18/2024 3:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go! Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 2/14/2024 9:16:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this fantastic work! Congratulations on the win!
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Date: 2/14/2024 5:10:00 AM
Jay, excellent writing and beautiful poem, congratulations on your placement in my contest, I love your image and quote also, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/13/2024 5:08:00 PM
Back with the utmost sincere congrats Jay for a superb poem my friend.
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Date: 2/13/2024 12:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Quest" write/picture/great ending. Enjoy your day with your win.
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Date: 2/3/2024 3:07:00 PM
I am sure when the sponsor reads this, her heart will melt as mine did. Its wonderful when all was perfect in your memory, and even better when you come to the struggles of present day. A truly beautiful splendidly written piece of art. Have to give this a fave.
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Date: 2/1/2024 9:52:00 PM
Nice quote to go with this well rhymed poem, Jay. It true, life is a quest ... a quest for rest. LOL I enjoyed reading your poetry today, my friend. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 2/1/2024 9:36:00 AM
This is absolutely beautiful dear Jay. So captivating- like Sara has said. I too, was enthralled reading through your marvellous lines. What a talent you are. The picture is perfect as it’s captivating too. The poem flows beautifully with wonderful rhymes. I especially love the last stanza. So good. Thank you for sharing this which was a pleasure to read. Blessings to you :)
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Date: 1/31/2024 4:19:00 PM
A fantasy quest, written quite beautifully, Jay. Love the accompanying picture, as well.
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Date: 1/31/2024 3:43:00 PM
absolutely wonderful poem, Jay! Your rhymes flowed so well that I didn't even realize this was a rhyme poem, for I was so caught up in the words and imagery and your message. I especially liked the last verse...this complex dance of future and past...I agree...am seeking a quest for grace. Well done! Faving this one, Sara
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Date: 1/31/2024 12:45:00 PM
A lovely poem Jay! So beautifully written….Debx
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Date: 1/31/2024 11:28:00 AM
- Wounds will heal...we must be prepared to get some scars...but never give up, Jay :) - A great poem with feelings ... Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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