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Quench Me

like dew on a rose drenching me in affection- fervor through my veins intensity knows thy warmth craving infatuation like sand in a tide creating ripples that tread- longing for thy touch my reverie shan’t run dry quench me with shores of thy thirst One or Two Tanka Contest Rick Parise December 18, 2017

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Date: 3/3/2018 10:52:00 AM
Lovely, Laura. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/28/2018 11:30:00 AM
A lot of passion, so few words, congratulations LuLoo...
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Date: 2/28/2018 10:48:00 AM
Stunning verse, Laura, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/26/2018 2:08:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your win. Great Tanka
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Date: 2/26/2018 8:00:00 AM
thank you dear Subimal :)-luloo
Date: 12/19/2017 11:00:00 AM
Nicely done Laura...
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Date: 2/26/2018 8:00:00 AM
thank you! :) -luloo

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