Queenie

A tiny bundle of fur a few weeks old
One little pup who missed siblings and whined
Many memories of you my life holds
A scar from the canned food on which you dined

Running and playing side by side those months
Until you were old enough to learn your job
Dad got my pet to herd the cows on paths
Not with the rich and famous to hobnob

When free we would walk down those dusty roads
Safe was the feeling when in your presence
Free from concern about the wood's heavy loads
Beside me each time truly a pleasance

Queenie so long ago your life ended
My awesome pet left memories splendid

Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton
Contest: Pets
Friday, November 28, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Harper Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 2:28 PM
Sara, very sweet and sincere sonnet, I like the form. How nice of you to remember your former pet for us, thanks very much for visiting.
Sathasivam Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 12:18 AM
Excellent. Great imagery and well penned. TFS
Meade Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 9:17 PM
I love cow dogs!! Touch my heart!
Haight Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 12:47 PM
Sarah, congratulations on your win. Our pets provide such special love in our lives, and we can never forget them. Lovely words and emotions in your poem. Hugs, Sandra
Kayode Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 11:58 PM
This is somehow touchy Sara,congrats on the win...huggs
A  Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 11:43 PM
This is a fine poem Sara, sad for the pup, but that is life. Enjoyed, SKAT
Johnson Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 5:28 PM
Pets come and go, but some are never forgotten. Congratulation. Love, Joyce
Boyd Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 4:25 PM
absence dose make the heart grow fonder. Thank you for shareing
Schumacker Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 2:45 PM
Hi Sara, Very sentimental, nostalgic write. Sorry to hear that Queenie is no longer with you. Pets become a very real part of our lives. Congratulations on your excellent win. Take care. Earl
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 1:05 PM
Childhood pets bring such sweet memories. Congratulations on your win Sara.
Allison Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 12:44 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 7:41 AM
delightful Sara so sorry you lost her congrats on win and ty for your support hugs
Guzzi Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 7:29 PM
Pets are a most wonderful experience, I love to see a picture of Queenie? Light & Love
Allison Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 6:19 PM
wonderful imagery in this beautifully penned sonnet Sara- makes me a bit sad reading these touching poems:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Onclaud Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 5:46 PM
so heartfelt and touching, sara.. I have experienced losing favorite pets so I can relate ...wonderfully crafted!.. huggs
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