Queenie

A tiny bundle of fur a few weeks old
One little pup who missed siblings and whined
Many memories of you my life holds
A scar from the canned food on which you dined

Running and playing side by side those months
Until you were old enough to learn your job
Dad got my pet to herd the cows on paths
Not with the rich and famous to hobnob

When free we would walk down those dusty roads
Safe was the feeling when in your presence
Free from concern about the wood's heavy loads
Beside me each time truly a pleasance

Queenie so long ago your life ended
My awesome pet left memories splendid

Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton
Contest: Pets
Friday, November 28, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/9/2014 2:28:00 PM
Sara, very sweet and sincere sonnet, I like the form. How nice of you to remember your former pet for us, thanks very much for visiting.
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Date: 12/1/2014 12:18:00 AM
Excellent. Great imagery and well penned. TFS
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Date: 11/30/2014 9:17:00 PM
I love cow dogs!! Touch my heart!
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Date: 11/30/2014 12:47:00 PM
Sarah, congratulations on your win. Our pets provide such special love in our lives, and we can never forget them. Lovely words and emotions in your poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/29/2014 11:58:00 PM
This is somehow touchy Sara,congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 11/29/2014 11:43:00 PM
This is a fine poem Sara, sad for the pup, but that is life. Enjoyed, SKAT
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Date: 11/29/2014 5:28:00 PM
Pets come and go, but some are never forgotten. Congratulation. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/29/2014 4:25:00 PM
absence dose make the heart grow fonder. Thank you for shareing
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Date: 11/29/2014 2:45:00 PM
Hi Sara, Very sentimental, nostalgic write. Sorry to hear that Queenie is no longer with you. Pets become a very real part of our lives. Congratulations on your excellent win. Take care. Earl
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Date: 11/29/2014 1:05:00 PM
Childhood pets bring such sweet memories. Congratulations on your win Sara.
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:44:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/29/2014 7:41:00 AM
delightful Sara so sorry you lost her congrats on win and ty for your support hugs
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Date: 11/28/2014 7:29:00 PM
Pets are a most wonderful experience, I love to see a picture of Queenie? Light & Love
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Date: 11/28/2014 6:19:00 PM
wonderful imagery in this beautifully penned sonnet Sara- makes me a bit sad reading these touching poems:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/28/2014 5:46:00 PM
so heartfelt and touching, sara.. I have experienced losing favorite pets so I can relate ...wonderfully crafted!.. huggs
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