Queen

"Not all Queens have a loving King" Quote By Poet My King has not been seen, I am his loving Queen. He fled from the scene, I did a very quick clean. The Joker has turned mean, some say he has gone green. They say don't blame the Joker he is only a teen, it is tough to be nineteen. My King~my King are you in the forest that is evergreen, hurry before they hunt down with gasoline. The Queen awakes with a scream, oh my what a weird dream.

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Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 12/23/2023 5:57:00 AM

This is so lovely enjoyed reading your poem actually put a smile on my face. sending hugs.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/23/2023 1:57:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Queen" story/write. It was fun to write. Have a great day writing away....................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/5/2023 3:58:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/5/2023 7:47:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my story/write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great day writing away....................

Jay Narain

Date: 8/3/2023 9:46:00 AM

Great poem. Congrats on your win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/3/2023 10:50:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my Queen/King~story/write. Have a great day writing away....................

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/3/2023 5:41:00 AM

An interesting, REALISTIC "take" on kings and queens, Paula. CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/3/2023 10:50:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my Queen/King fun story/write. Have a great day writing away....................

Valsa George

Date: 8/2/2023 9:58:00 PM

Back to your interesting poem to congratulate you on your first place win dear Paula !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/3/2023 10:49:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad to see you back. Have a great day writing away....................

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/2/2023 2:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win, Paula. A really fun poem, especially the ending!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/3/2023 10:48:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun Queen write/ending. Have a great day writing away....................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/2/2023 1:07:00 PM

"1 Place" ~ Queen ~ Date Written: 7/31/2023

Valsa George

Date: 8/1/2023 9:40:00 PM

This is certainly a fun read, equally a great entry for the contest. All the Best dear Paula.... !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/2/2023 1:07:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your best. Glad you enjoyed my fun Queen write. Have a great day writing away....................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/1/2023 10:20:00 AM

- A dream which could destroy the whole forest, Paula ... imaginative and great writing (we chose the same word :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/1/2023 11:10:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing, best wishes and kind words. Glad you enjoyed my Queen dream write. Looks like we chose the same word. Hugs... Have a great day writing away....................

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/31/2023 9:26:00 PM

:) ~ enjoyed the dream, Paula! Dream on!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/1/2023 9:12:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my Queen dream write. Yes, Dream on... Have a great day writing away....................

David Kavanagh

Date: 7/31/2023 2:27:00 PM

I like the dark twist here Paula, hunting the King down with gasoline, then deus ex machina appears in the form of a dream, excellently penned, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/1/2023 9:10:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my dark twist/hunting the King down dream. It was a fun tale to write. Have a great day writing away....................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/31/2023 1:39:00 PM

Queen ~ Date Written: 7/31/2023