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Queen

"Not all Queens have a loving King"
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My King has not been seen,
I am his loving Queen.
He fled from the scene,
I did a very quick clean.
The Joker has turned mean,
some say he has gone green.
They say don't blame the Joker he is only a teen,
it is tough to be nineteen.
My King~my King are you in the forest that is evergreen,
hurry before they hunt down with gasoline.
The Queen awakes with a scream,
oh my what a weird dream.

Copyright © Paula Goldsmith | Year Posted 2023

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Yolanda Nicholsen Date: 12/23/2023 5:57:00 AM This is so lovely enjoyed reading your poem actually put a smile on my face. sending hugs. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 12/23/2023 1:57:00 PM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Queen" story/write. It was fun to write. Have a great day writing away....................

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/5/2023 3:58:00 AM Congratulations on this winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/5/2023 7:47:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my story/write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great day writing away....................

Jay Narain Date: 8/3/2023 9:46:00 AM Great poem. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/3/2023 10:50:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my Queen/King~story/write. Have a great day writing away....................

Janice Canerdy Date: 8/3/2023 5:41:00 AM An interesting, REALISTIC "take" on kings and queens, Paula. CONGRATS on your win. Janice Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/3/2023 10:50:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my Queen/King fun story/write. Have a great day writing away....................

Valsa George Date: 8/2/2023 9:58:00 PM Back to your interesting poem to congratulate you on your first place win dear Paula ! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/3/2023 10:49:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad to see you back. Have a great day writing away....................

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 8/2/2023 2:39:00 PM Congratulations on your top win, Paula. A really fun poem, especially the ending! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/3/2023 10:48:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun Queen write/ending. Have a great day writing away....................

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/2/2023 1:07:00 PM "1 Place" ~ Queen ~ Date Written: 7/31/2023 Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 8/1/2023 9:40:00 PM This is certainly a fun read, equally a great entry for the contest. All the Best dear Paula.... ! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/2/2023 1:07:00 PM Thanks for reading/writing and for your best. Glad you enjoyed my fun Queen write. Have a great day writing away....................

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/1/2023 10:20:00 AM - A dream which could destroy the whole forest, Paula ... imaginative and great writing (we chose the same word :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/1/2023 11:10:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing, best wishes and kind words. Glad you enjoyed my Queen dream write. Looks like we chose the same word. Hugs... Have a great day writing away....................

Unseeking Seeker Date: 7/31/2023 9:26:00 PM :) ~ enjoyed the dream, Paula! Dream on! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/1/2023 9:12:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my Queen dream write. Yes, Dream on... Have a great day writing away....................

David Kavanagh Date: 7/31/2023 2:27:00 PM I like the dark twist here Paula, hunting the King down with gasoline, then deus ex machina appears in the form of a dream, excellently penned, cheers David Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/1/2023 9:10:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my dark twist/hunting the King down dream. It was a fun tale to write. Have a great day writing away....................

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/31/2023 1:39:00 PM Queen ~ Date Written: 7/31/2023 Login to Reply