JC Brul Poet Quatrain

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You came like rain I waited since twilight;
How would I deeply say with tenderness?
the way you filled my life with cool delight,
Like a touch of raindrops in the wilderness.

You gaze like ivory clouds at noontime;
How would I deeply say with so much glee?
the way you touch my heart with love sublime,
like a kiss of cloud's silhouette in me.

You smile like crescent moon in summer nights,
How would I deeply say with hopeful heart?
the way you soothe my soul in soaring heights 
like a soft moonglow that shall not depart.

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John Watt April 18, 2020 at 11:28 AM I enjoy your old style English in this love poem, poet JCB. Nice flow and a wonderful simile to end with. Well done! ~ John

Debjani Mitra April 16, 2020 at 7:38 PM Hey, you write so well, keep the gems sparkling, enjoyed all your poems, waiting for more

Francis J Grasso April 15, 2020 at 10:31 PM A lovely way to say I love you. Beautiful, JCB. ...Fran

Richard Lamoureux April 15, 2020 at 9:31 AM You are an iceberg poet. There is much depth beneath the words that grace the surface.

John Gondolf April 13, 2020 at 1:08 PM This is so beautiful, JCB, like the touch of raindrops in the wilderness. Welcome to Poetry Soup. John JC Brul April 13, 2020 at 5:15 PM Thank you for your warm welcome dear poet John.Stay safe.

John Fleming April 12, 2020 at 11:00 AM This has a distinct Chinese poetic flavour to it all; you might enjoy reading up on both Japanese and Chinese poetry formats...it might well suit your particular style of writing I do very much think. Welcome to the "Soup", JCB Burl! :) john JC Brul April 13, 2020 at 4:25 AM Thank you dear poet John for your insightful feedback. Looking forward to reading your creations.

Jc Hawkens April 12, 2020 at 7:38 AM I love this poem, simply beautiful. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope all is well JC Hawkens JC Brul April 13, 2020 at 4:25 AM Thank you dear poet JC..Wishing you well.

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 10, 2020 at 10:34 PM I simply love this enchanting poem! It's in my faves. A Happy Easter to you and yours. JC Brul April 11, 2020 at 2:22 AM Thank you so much dear poet Judy for such a heart-warming comment and for adding this to your faves.

Kim Rodrigues April 10, 2020 at 10:39 AM Sooo beautiful! JC Brul April 10, 2020 at 2:17 PM And you are soooo sweet dear poet Kim!

Caren Krutsinger April 10, 2020 at 10:14 AM Your soul is releasing pure poetry in this missive JCB JC Brul April 10, 2020 at 2:19 PM And you are exuding energy that inspires us(beginners) dear poet Caren. Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich April 9, 2020 at 4:02 PM what a beautiful gem, JCB JC Brul April 9, 2020 at 6:50 PM Thank you dear Andrea.