Quatrain Tranquil Eyes

Poet, Rich of my quiet cherry trees,
Of my peaceful lilacs like pink stones,
Rich in my willows in ardent prayer, prose,
I can finally think of your tranquil eyes.


Poète, Riche de mes cerisiers tranquilles,
De mes lilas paisibles comme des pierres roses,
Riche de mes saules en ardente prière, prose,
Je peux enfin penser à tes yeux tranquilles.






inspired by french poet Paul Verlaine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 10/8/2023 1:34:00 PM
wow, this is so pretty.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/10/2023 10:06:00 AM
thanks andrea, this is nice reading
Date: 10/8/2023 2:11:00 AM
A very lyrical poem. Loved it. Blessings.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/10/2023 10:07:00 AM
thanks Victor for the support
Date: 10/7/2023 8:55:00 PM
So nice to read this poetic gem, Yann, :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/10/2023 10:07:00 AM
than you so much evelyn,
Date: 10/7/2023 8:53:00 AM
What a lovely poem my friend.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/7/2023 7:54:00 PM
thanks Jerry
Date: 10/6/2023 9:04:00 PM
Lovely simile, Yann. Janice
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/7/2023 1:14:00 AM
thanks a lot Janice, thanks to Paul Verlaine too
Date: 10/6/2023 8:30:00 PM
The eyes are the window to the soul, my friend. A lovely poem in two languages, I impressed. Having tranquil eyes says a lot about a person, and they are beautiful. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Yann. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/7/2023 1:15:00 AM
thank you so much Bill, yes the eyes are a window, your words are very apprciated have a nice week end
Date: 10/6/2023 4:51:00 AM
The French flows fluently in this beautiful poem yann. Thanks always
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/7/2023 5:36:00 AM
I know yann; your profile says you are from France . That's why I was so surprised that people were impressed that you wrote this poem in two languages lolol
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/7/2023 1:17:00 AM
thanks a lot, Jeff, i have no merite, french is my birth language , you support is appreciated, have a nice week end
Date: 10/5/2023 9:19:00 PM
I understand that you are a linguist, writing in more than one language ! Eyes reflecting tranquility is everyone's attraction. Enjoyed your poem Yaan
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/7/2023 1:19:00 AM
ys ideed, Valsa, we all seek this tranquility, if it exists somewhere, hope you get some, this week end, your comment is a precious one, enjoyed
Date: 10/5/2023 12:52:00 PM
- Lovely - Wish I could read French...a beautiful language :) - hugs
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/7/2023 1:21:00 AM
thanks Anne lise, for the support and kind wwors, and message, appreciated yann
Date: 10/5/2023 12:49:00 PM
Great inspiration of a short French poem. Blessings.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/7/2023 1:22:00 AM
thnak you very much, for the kind message Victor, have a nice week end yann
Date: 10/5/2023 12:44:00 PM
Nice rhymes.. I see you are fluent in French.. Always great to see a translation.. even though I dont really know the language..
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/7/2023 1:24:00 AM
no merit SO, french is my birth language, apppreciated your support, have a sweet sunday
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