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so long the days of singing rays have come to meet their sullen end twixt nights of joy with hidden ploy a sweetly tone, they do offend O gasp! the serpent true must strike O gasp! the lustful raging psych whose cares are lost forever long roaring out, O hear my song! now mute...peace...whist...still ideas soon drain, decisions fill a mind at pace with thoughts that spill float soundlessly thy solstice chill the misty seep, foreboding reap emotions run amok like thieves for darkly cast, a favored past along is lain misguided leaves -Sam Robinson Iambic Tetrameter

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Date: 9/23/2013 5:44:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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Date: 9/22/2013 7:45:00 PM
Hi Samuel, nice Metrical verse win... luv~ Linda
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Date: 9/22/2013 12:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with great poetry. Love, Joyce
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Samuel Robinson
Date: 9/22/2013 4:31:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 9/21/2013 11:18:00 PM
Great write my dear friend Samue! thank you so much for sharing! So enjoyed and so love it. Many hearty congratulations on your super win! love and hugs, Leonora
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Samuel Robinson
Date: 9/22/2013 4:31:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 9/20/2013 11:58:00 PM
Congrats on winning the place in the contest, Samuel
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Samuel Robinson
Date: 9/21/2013 6:12:00 PM
Thank you! I like that this one isn't obvious what its meaning is!
Date: 9/20/2013 8:39:00 PM
nicely penned...congrats on your win :)
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Samuel Robinson
Date: 9/21/2013 6:08:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 9/11/2013 8:10:00 PM
Hi Samuel, I not much of a meter poet... Someday I wish to learn. Your writes are so deep. I will learn more of your writes, thanks for sharing...xox..Linda
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Samuel Robinson
Date: 9/16/2013 7:34:00 AM
I can't seem to write without a strong rhythm...
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Samuel Robinson
Date: 9/16/2013 7:31:00 AM
I can't seem to write without a strong rhythm...
Date: 8/24/2013 11:13:00 AM
- Well done, Samuel !! - - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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