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Quagmire
Sponsored by: Constance La France
02/03/2024

“Love defines who we are as a species,” By Poet A quagmire is soft, murky land that shakes or yields under the foot, in other words, a swamp. But, one that is imbued with sticky mud, where progress is slow and soles get stuck. A quagmire is also a synonym for an unpleasant, constrictive situation, which is not easy to escape from. Look around, we are stuck in a swamp of greed and hate. A quagmire of our own making; progress is a by-product of war, innocent blood sticks to our souls. We are sinking into conformity; stuck in our ways change is strictly rationed to the masses; its introduction tightly controlled by a few. We are born as a cog in a system designed to extract our individualism and replace it with compliance thereby keeping us stuck within the very gears that keep grinding us down in society. We need to drain that swamp!

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Date: 2/18/2024 3:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go! Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I wrote a short story about a swamp it is entitled, Unkie. It is posted on here. Sara K
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/18/2024 7:40:00 AM
Thanks, Sara, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/14/2024 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/14/2024 2:54:00 PM
Thanks, Robert, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/14/2024 5:05:00 AM
Emile, excellent writing and congratulations on your placement in my contest, love your quote and your image is well suited to the poem, blessings, Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/14/2024 6:39:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, I appreciate the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/4/2024 5:15:00 PM
Truly, Emile, we do create our own quagmires that keep "grinding us down." I think what we often forget is that we have the ability to step out of the quagmire with courageous choices before they suffocate us and return to our God given gifts and giftedness to exercise their ability to bring about change, especially through our words as writers! Best wishes for a win in the contest. You are using your pen and your gift to share your wisdom. Blessings! Soup Mail!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/5/2024 7:55:00 AM
Thank you Sam, I welcome and appreciate your comment my friend, Emile. I checked Soup Mail and found nothing?
Date: 2/3/2024 3:03:00 PM
Hello Emile, yes there is a lot of hate and greed in this world. people should learn to live together. Learn to get along. After all we only have 1 life. You brought up very interesting facts. My friend. Enjoy your weekend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/5/2024 11:14:00 AM
Hello Emile, Hi, I hope all is swell with you. You aren welcome. My friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene/
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/4/2024 9:55:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comment my friend, have a good day, Emile.
Date: 2/3/2024 1:17:00 PM
Dear Emile, I wanted to take a moment to express my admiration for your poem Your portrayal of the quagmire as both a physical landscape and a metaphor for societal stagnation is incredibly clear and thought-provoking. Your exploration of how greed, hate, and conformity contribute to this metaphorical quagmire is both poignant and timely. The call to action at the end of the poem, urging us to drain the swamp and break free from the constraints of societal norms, is powerful. - Daniel
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/3/2024 1:52:00 PM
Thank you Daniel, I welcome and appreciate your comment my friend, Emile.

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