Quagmire

A quagmire is a soft, murky bog that shakes or yields underfoot. In other words, a swamp, that is imbued with sticky mud: where progress is slow, for it's easy to get stuck. A quagmire is also a synonym for an unpleasant, constrictive situation; which is not easy to escape from. Look around; we are stuck in a swamp of greed and hate, a quagmire of our own making. Bigotry is a by-product of manufactured fear, as the blood of innocents sullies our souls. And we are sinking into conformity; stuck in the quicksand of complacency. The hope of change is strictly rationed to the masses, while tightly controlled by a few. We are born as a cog in a system designed to extract individualism, and replace it with compliance. Thereby keeping us stuck within the very gears, that are grinding us down. We need to drain that political swamp, even though its alligators are always on patrol.
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Kendrick Avatar
February 18, 2024 at 3:55 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go! Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I wrote a short story about a swamp it is entitled, Unkie. It is posted on here. Sara K
Pinet Avatar
February 18, 2024 at 7:40 AM
Thanks, Sara, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Sidwell Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 9:07 AM
Congratulations on your win!
Pinet Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 2:54 PM
Thanks, Robert, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 5:05 AM
Emile, excellent writing and congratulations on your placement in my contest, love your quote and your image is well suited to the poem, blessings, Constance
Pinet Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 6:39 AM
Thanks, Constance, I appreciate the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
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February 4, 2024 at 5:15 PM
Truly, Emile, we do create our own quagmires that keep "grinding us down." I think what we often forget is that we have the ability to step out of the quagmire with courageous choices before they suffocate us and return to our God given gifts and giftedness to exercise their ability to bring about change, especially through our words as writers! Best wishes for a win in the contest. You are using your pen and your gift to share your wisdom. Blessings! Soup Mail!
Pinet Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 7:55 AM
Thank you Sam, I welcome and appreciate your comment my friend, Emile. I checked Soup Mail and found nothing?
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 3:03 PM
Hello Emile, yes there is a lot of hate and greed in this world. people should learn to live together. Learn to get along. After all we only have 1 life. You brought up very interesting facts. My friend. Enjoy your weekend. /Darlene/
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February 5, 2024 at 11:14 AM
Hello Emile, Hi, I hope all is swell with you. You aren welcome. My friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene/
Pinet Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 9:55 AM
Thanks, Darlene, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comment my friend, have a good day, Emile.
Rodgers Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 1:17 PM
Dear Emile, I wanted to take a moment to express my admiration for your poem Your portrayal of the quagmire as both a physical landscape and a metaphor for societal stagnation is incredibly clear and thought-provoking. Your exploration of how greed, hate, and conformity contribute to this metaphorical quagmire is both poignant and timely. The call to action at the end of the poem, urging us to drain the swamp and break free from the constraints of societal norms, is powerful. - Daniel
Pinet Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 1:52 PM
Thank you Daniel, I welcome and appreciate your comment my friend, Emile.
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