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Quadro Sky Laser

QUADRO Sky Laser

Western sky laser,
beams golden rays in linear.
Touching sullen rooms,
it leaves starry nights to gazers.

1/12/17

26 syllables

QUADRO - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: nette onclaud

Copyright © Janis Medders Tobechi | Year Posted 2017

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John Hamilton Date: 1/16/2017 10:56:00 AM Really enjoyed this one thought it would place higher. Nice to place anyway, some others I liked never placed. Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 1/16/2017 4:29:00 PM Thanks, John. I seem to have just made it.

Rob Carmack Date: 1/15/2017 10:55:00 PM We were birds of a feather with our western views of this pic. Congrats Janis. Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 1/16/2017 4:32:00 PM You are so right. Some people saw sunrise and some saw sunset. I'm glad someone else saw sunset. Thanks, rob.

Afzal Nusker Date: 1/15/2017 10:02:00 PM Like a beautiful painting. Congratulations! Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 1/16/2017 4:33:00 PM Thanks, Afzal.

Sandra Haight Date: 1/15/2017 6:44:00 PM Such great imagery presented in so few words, Janis. Love the 'laser' reference! Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 1/16/2017 4:33:00 PM Thanks and hugubac. Blessings, Janis.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/15/2017 3:49:00 PM a great metaphor, Janis. Congrats in ths contest. Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 1/16/2017 4:34:00 PM Thanks, Andrea.

Jan Allison Date: 1/15/2017 3:01:00 PM absolutely beautiful Janis love the laser sky imagery:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 1/16/2017 4:36:00 PM It appears to look like that. Thanks and blessings, Janis.

Mark Martin Date: 1/15/2017 1:39:00 PM Like the laser reference Janis! Congrats! :-) Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 1/15/2017 1:51:00 PM Thanks, Mark

Paul Callus Date: 1/15/2017 12:38:00 PM A most lovely entry, Janis. Your western sky lasers point the way to a merited win! Congratulations! Regards // paul Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 1/15/2017 1:52:00 PM Thanks, Paul.

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/15/2017 12:14:00 PM imaginative range of images,janis...congrats on your slot and thanks for supporting this contest..huggs Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 1/15/2017 1:54:00 PM Yes, it is interesting to read the poems and see who saw sunrise as opposed to sunset. i think the difference came in a state of mind and age. A very useful picture.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 1/12/2017 6:19:00 PM Nicely written. I love those western skies. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 1/13/2017 9:02:00 AM I hope it's not sun up. Thanks.

Chris Green Date: 1/12/2017 4:38:00 PM Perfectly written and a wonderful take on the image Janis. Really nice my friend, good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 1/13/2017 9:02:00 AM Thanks for the well wishes Chris, Blessings, Janis.