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QUADRO Sky Laser Western sky laser, beams golden rays in linear. Touching sullen rooms, it leaves starry nights to gazers. 1/12/17 26 syllables QUADRO - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: nette onclaud

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John Hamilton

Date: 1/16/2017 10:56:00 AM

Really enjoyed this one thought it would place higher. Nice to place anyway, some others I liked never placed.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/16/2017 4:29:00 PM

Thanks, John. I seem to have just made it.

Rob Carmack

Date: 1/15/2017 10:55:00 PM

We were birds of a feather with our western views of this pic. Congrats Janis.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/16/2017 4:32:00 PM

You are so right. Some people saw sunrise and some saw sunset. I'm glad someone else saw sunset. Thanks, rob.

Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/15/2017 10:02:00 PM

Like a beautiful painting. Congratulations!

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/16/2017 4:33:00 PM

Thanks, Afzal.

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/15/2017 6:44:00 PM

Such great imagery presented in so few words, Janis. Love the 'laser' reference! Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/16/2017 4:33:00 PM

Thanks and hugubac. Blessings, Janis.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2017 3:49:00 PM

a great metaphor, Janis. Congrats in ths contest.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/16/2017 4:34:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/15/2017 3:01:00 PM

absolutely beautiful Janis love the laser sky imagery:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/16/2017 4:36:00 PM

It appears to look like that. Thanks and blessings, Janis.

Mark Martin

Date: 1/15/2017 1:39:00 PM

Like the laser reference Janis! Congrats! :-)

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/15/2017 1:51:00 PM

Thanks, Mark

Paul Callus

Date: 1/15/2017 12:38:00 PM

A most lovely entry, Janis. Your western sky lasers point the way to a merited win! Congratulations! Regards // paul

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/15/2017 1:52:00 PM

Thanks, Paul.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/15/2017 12:14:00 PM

imaginative range of images,janis...congrats on your slot and thanks for supporting this contest..huggs

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/15/2017 1:54:00 PM

Yes, it is interesting to read the poems and see who saw sunrise as opposed to sunset. i think the difference came in a state of mind and age. A very useful picture.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/12/2017 6:19:00 PM

Nicely written. I love those western skies. Good luck in the contest.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/13/2017 9:02:00 AM

I hope it's not sun up. Thanks.

Chris Green

Date: 1/12/2017 4:38:00 PM

Perfectly written and a wonderful take on the image Janis. Really nice my friend, good luck in the contest.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/13/2017 9:02:00 AM

Thanks for the well wishes Chris, Blessings, Janis.