Quack

I had a little finch
as quiet as could be.
He was rather lonely
so an idea came to me.

I'd get him some roommates
to talk to through the day.
I bought two Zebra Finches
so he'd have friends to play.

My Bengalese Finch is quiet.
He never makes a sound,
but now the strangest noises
I'm hearing all around.

One of the new finches
sounds just like a duck.
When I try to see which one
I'm just out of luck.

As soon as they see me
the noises stop, you see.
So which finch thinks he's a duck
is truly baffling me.

I'm sure the neighbours think
a duck is living here.
He's very quiet if I'm in sight,
when I'm not, he's loud and clear.

So a quacking finch
is living in my house.
He makes a lot of noise
for someone smaller than a mouse.

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Date: 4/11/2012 11:17:00 AM
Wonderful, light and funny. I thuroughly enjoyed this poem or as you usually put it CUTE
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Date: 12/19/2011 5:29:00 PM
How hilarious! Hahah! I really enjoyed reading this one! Always, Laura
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Date: 12/18/2011 5:54:00 PM
Francine....This is adorable! It flows nicely, too. Thanks so much for your comment as I did forget to enter that in your contest-fixed now :)
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Date: 12/17/2011 10:41:00 PM
great pen! Your poem is rather cute lol
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Lisa Cooper
Date: 12/18/2011 7:22:00 AM
Sorry no offense.
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Francine Roberts
Date: 12/17/2011 11:18:00 PM
Canadians spell it with the "u" , as we do colour and harbour, only Americans spell it neighbors
Date: 12/13/2011 4:41:00 PM
Francine thanks for the heads up, have a look now tell me what you think please, thanks ..David
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Date: 12/13/2011 2:00:00 PM
Francine, do you have any other pets beside birds. I do not as my parents will not let me, that's one reason i spend so much time at Chef's cabin. He has 6 dogs, 9 cats, 14 rabbits, 3 guinne pigs and a Deer in the back yard, you can see any morning. I was wondering if i can still enter your contest with the poem i wrote on HG's sight, "Chef - Dad", I will delete it from HG's poems and send it to Your contest if that's legal yours always kenny
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Date: 12/13/2011 12:56:00 PM
Sweet and funny - good. OXOX Love Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/13/2011 12:41:00 AM
Francine, Great poem, Chef has a Minor bird he taught to say hello Harry when he says hello bird. I will be at the Library tomorrow. I see your contest filling up fast I hope to get on sight before its over. Can I still use the Poem "Chef - Dad" for your contest if i take it off Chef's sight and put it on mine?? Kenny
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Date: 12/12/2011 10:21:00 PM
haha, what a funny little story poem. Is it for a contest?
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Date: 12/12/2011 3:46:00 PM
a feathery counterpoise (on the end) or a quack attack because:)
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Date: 12/11/2011 2:39:00 PM
How funny! Enjoyed reading this. Kim
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Date: 12/11/2011 8:05:00 AM
Francine, quacking good poem ha ha..David
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Date: 12/11/2011 4:38:00 AM
nice one
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Date: 12/10/2011 10:16:00 PM
Oh how very cute ..Loved it Francine! love,Deb
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Date: 12/10/2011 10:04:00 PM
One of my neighbors had a peacock. It made a loud enough noise to make its presence known. If you like quiet, don't ever get a peacock (or peahen). Your poem is a delight to read as usual.
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