Pyramid of happiness

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Like the pyramids a happy life needs a firm foundation - Mine

a simple pyramid shape poem

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Take a pinch of caution. A dash of pride. One dollop of charm. Add big lumps of kindness. Mix with a sense of humour. Throw in a large handful of love. Blend it all together with patience. And you will make a happy cake of life.

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Lizzie Treetop

Date: 11/19/2011 9:21:00 PM

Happy person, happy cake of love! Congratulations on rhis winning entry!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/5/2011 10:54:00 PM

;-) CONGRATULATIONS, ON YOUR WIN~ Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/3/2011 2:50:00 PM

I want to get cookin on this new recipe immediately!! How beautiful your kitchen must look! Fun write...very fun! Gwendolen

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/3/2011 12:53:00 AM

Congratulations on the win with this lovely poem, Margaret

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2011 9:05:00 PM

Yep, it did.Congratulations!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2011 9:04:00 PM

Margaret is this for the happy poem contest? I too was thinking of doing a ten line etheree.(great minds!) Anyway, I reread her rule, and unless I am wrong, I think she said it had to be at least twelve lines. I hope I am wrong on that, because I really had an idea for an etheree. (oh, wait, I see Carolyn is congratulating you. Maybe this one won in Brian's contest then?)