Elai Cee Poet Free verse

Pyramid

PYRAMID



                                                  P
                                           alwa Y s be you
                                      that you R love’s for me
                                up to the pyr A mid,shout a feeling
                         both our sparkling M erry eyes,flew us to air
                  what amazing proposal, I will never forget ever, my love
         let me shout in the whole worl D you stopped my heart, back to Egypt




                                               ELAI CEE
                                               @elaicee
                                                2015

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Denis Picozzi June 2, 2015 at 12:36 AM I apologize for such a late response! amazing piece, the creativity of how you wrote it and built the pyramid! I enjoyed this very much. I shall explore with more of your writes.

Milton Robertson April 28, 2015 at 8:09 PM This is simply Brilliant. Beautifully Done.

Richard Lamoureux April 23, 2015 at 8:09 AM This is so cool! Also congratulations, I hope he treats you well. Welcome back to the soup. Elai Cee April 23, 2015 at 10:31 AM thanks Richard :) we're planning for best way to build a tranquility new life.

Mulaudzi Ndifelani Eric April 19, 2015 at 7:41 AM up to the pyr A mid,shout a feeling. let me shout in the whole worl D. I am impressed with this one.... Elai Cee April 19, 2015 at 8:06 AM thanks Mulaudzi, my heart is overwhelming to know that :)

Mario De Paz April 19, 2015 at 5:54 AM I come to see your beautyful pyramid plenty of open love instead of mystery as ordinarily pyramids do. Anyway, it was a pleasure to read open love Elai Cee April 23, 2015 at 10:29 AM thanks a lot Mario

Sarah Muldoon April 18, 2015 at 10:34 AM I enjoyed reading this clever write, I know of the feeling your writing about and you captured it beautifully, welcome back and thanks for reading me :) Elai Cee April 18, 2015 at 11:05 AM thanks for the visit Sarah

Hannington Mumo April 17, 2015 at 6:18 AM Great skill went into composing this. I liked it. Your poem stopped my heart!7. Elai Cee April 17, 2015 at 9:32 AM thanks Hannington good to see u here :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 14, 2015 at 1:26 AM weeeee, this is such a lovely pyramid with so much sweetness in it.. :)!!! thanks much for visiting my poem.. lovely//olive eloisa Elai Cee April 14, 2015 at 6:21 AM Hi! Olive nice seeing u here

Andrea Dietrich April 13, 2015 at 6:23 PM hey, did you get a marriage proposal on a pyramid? Awesome, and i love the shape of this. Elai Cee April 13, 2015 at 9:02 PM yeah Andrea thanks for reading :)

Patrycjusz Kopec April 13, 2015 at 1:50 PM Nice combination of words interesting way to write a poem Elai Cee April 18, 2015 at 9:52 AM pleasure Patry

Jan Allison April 13, 2015 at 8:10 AM I love the clever form you have created:-) Hugs jan xx Elai Cee April 13, 2015 at 9:05 AM thanks Jan

Cona Adams April 13, 2015 at 8:01 AM Cleverly penned. Thanks for sharing. Elai Cee April 13, 2015 at 8:07 AM thanks Cona u r amazing poet

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther April 13, 2015 at 7:17 AM Hello Elaine. Perfect piece of poetry. Love the Egyptian theme. Elai Cee April 13, 2015 at 8:06 AM hehe that's ok thanks for the reading my poem Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther April 13, 2015 at 7:21 AM Sorry spell checked your name wrong. Elai

Nandita Das April 13, 2015 at 6:55 AM Wow, what an awesome pyramid. Loved this. Elai Cee April 13, 2015 at 7:13 AM thank u Nandita I enjoyed reading your poem too

M. L. Kiser April 13, 2015 at 6:43 AM Beautiful, I love everything to do with egypt. A great read.