Pyramid

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Just feeling like I needed something different and crazy!! I don't mean any disrespect to those gone on before or their burial sites. SK

Egypt Used pyramids As burial tomb sites For their famous kings called Pharaoh Narrow at the top, with very wide base Similar form rictameter First five lines, or last four Laughter!! Ha!! Ha!! Egypt

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/27/2022 12:26:00 PM

Interesting next to last line!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/27/2022 3:21:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. I appreciate the comment. Your visits always add a new dimension to my page. Sara

Miranda Hawley

Date: 7/21/2022 9:59:00 AM

Good job!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/21/2022 12:25:00 PM

Thank you, Miranda. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 7/20/2022 7:45:00 AM

Great example of Rictameter in rictameter form, Sara. Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/20/2022 7:47:00 AM

Thank you, Bill. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/20/2022 1:11:00 AM

Poetry is art and so no disrespect. Pyramids are very complex and not easy to build.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/20/2022 2:30:00 AM

Victor, I looked them up to see what they looked like on the inside just out of curiosity. I can't see how they did all of that with the tools that they had at the time. Of course, the slaves they used were forced labor, so their wellbeing did not matter. Your visit is always uplifting. Sara

Robert Gorelick

Date: 7/19/2022 6:39:00 PM

You showed no disrespect. Well, perhaps you offended somebody's mummy! Robert

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/20/2022 2:23:00 AM

Thank you, Robert. I got a chuckle at your comment so a bright moment for me. Sara