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Just feeling like I needed something different and crazy!! I don't mean any disrespect to those gone on before or their burial sites. SK

 

Pyramid

Egypt Used pyramids As burial tomb sites For their famous kings called Pharaoh Narrow at the top, with very wide base Similar form rictameter First five lines, or last four Laughter!! Ha!! Ha!! Egypt
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Kerr Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 1:11 AM
A very innovative and ingenious application of the Rictameter form. Sara. This story unfolds smoothly with a humorous twist Howard
Kendrick Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 2:59 AM
Thank you, Howard. I appreciate the visit and nice review. Sara K
George Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 4:07 AM
Beautiful analogy of pyramids to Ricta meter. In these lines, no one suspects any disrespect.... dear Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 5:46 AM
Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the understanding review. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 12:26 PM
Interesting next to last line!!
Kendrick Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 3:21 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I appreciate the comment. Your visits always add a new dimension to my page. Sara
Hawley Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 9:59 AM
Good job!
Kendrick Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 12:25 PM
Thank you, Miranda. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Baker Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 7:45 AM
Great example of Rictameter in rictameter form, Sara. Bill
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 7:47 AM
Thank you, Bill. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 1:11 AM
Poetry is art and so no disrespect. Pyramids are very complex and not easy to build.
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 2:30 AM
Victor, I looked them up to see what they looked like on the inside just out of curiosity. I can't see how they did all of that with the tools that they had at the time. Of course, the slaves they used were forced labor, so their wellbeing did not matter. Your visit is always uplifting. Sara
Gorelick Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 6:39 PM
You showed no disrespect. Well, perhaps you offended somebody's mummy! Robert
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 2:23 AM
Thank you, Robert. I got a chuckle at your comment so a bright moment for me. Sara
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