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Puzzled Smiles

PUZZLED SMILES When will we want what’s worthwhile? Seems some children always choose wrong over right, And adults’ alternatives are also selected with short-sight: Perennial problem posed, from Adam’s to my puzzled smile. To take a snake’s apple? Or grapple for goodness’ sake? To plump for perdition, or select salvation? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Entered in John Freeman’s Contest - Alliteration Poems Please

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Date: 9/12/2011 7:40:00 PM
Great moral write..Enjoyed reading..Congrats on your winning alliteration win..Sara
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Date: 9/12/2011 6:41:00 PM
congratulations on your wonderful win!!!----Lori
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Date: 9/12/2011 1:49:00 PM
Sydney, Thanks for the honor of reading your poem "PUZZLED SMILES" , I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your fourth place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/12/2011 12:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sydney! Kim
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Date: 9/12/2011 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2011 4:11:00 AM
Sydney congrats on your win ..David
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Date: 9/12/2011 12:36:00 AM
A 4th place congratulations Sydney for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR
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Date: 9/11/2011 11:39:00 PM
a perfect four. glad to be wallowin' it withya, sydski. peace and love and goodness ~n
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