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Put On Hold

You’re love for me, once wild and free, you seem to put on hold
The time not right, in day or night, your arms will not enfold
I’m left to feel the pain so real of being left alone
While deep inside at eventide desire starts to roam

My heart astress filled with distress at thoughts of pleasures passed
Where passion burned and your heart yearned to hold me safe and fast
The night aflame, unchaste, no shame, I laid bare all for you
Of every thrill you got your fill and tasted honeyed dew

Romanced the night till morning light, our lust we’d consummate
Then quick repast to help us last, new whims to satiate
We’d kiss and sigh and reach the high of passion’s trembling peak
And reach as one and come undone and lie there spent and weak

But now on hold, these moments, gold, you’ve turned to endless wait
On hold, on hold, if truth be told, I crave this love to sate
So come to me, and let us be, in lovefest intertwined
Change that “on hold” and come be bold, to bed my body bind

Hold on to hips and taste the lips with honey sweet and wet
Unpause the time; taste the sublime, and love without regret
And as you lie, contented sigh, your head on pillowed breast
Your arms I'll hold, in mine, I'll fold, and let you dream and rest

Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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October 18, 2015 at 7:10 PM
Fantastic, absolutely wonderful flow, sweeping poetry at its very best my little Desert Orchid, somehow being on hold can be the best thing till those two people eventually get together. Take care, Richard
Tor Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 8:31 PM
Very sensual and romantic Eileen your erotic side came alive in this steamy write. Tastefully done.
Manassian Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 12:29 AM
I'm glad you find it tasteful, Michael. I do love to write on sensual themes. :) I appreciate your kind words and visit.
Fleming Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 1:55 PM
Certainly very "racy"...But very tasteful also. A nice balance, Eileen. Nicely done! Best regards! :) john
Manassian Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 12:31 AM
Thanks, John. I'm glad you liked this. Two great adjectives that have me happy...racy and tasteful. :)
Callus Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 12:23 PM
Wow! Eileen this is beautiful in every sense! Despite love and passion being on hold, you strive to bring them back to life; who can resist your words?! The poem rhymes and flows effortlessly; a pleasure to read! #7 Hugs // paul
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October 18, 2015 at 12:32 AM
:) Thank you, Paul. I value your opinion. I hold it in high esteem. I'm glad you liked this. I liked the flow as well. It just...CAME...to me. ;) Hugs
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October 16, 2015 at 10:16 AM
It's perfect Eileen.
Manassian Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 11:04 AM
Thanks, Richard. I'm pretty happy with how it turned out. I liked that I got those internal rhymes rhymed! ;)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 8:04 AM
The ooh la la hotsty totsy is in full force with this one Eileen!
Manassian Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 11:03 AM
Don't rightly know what higs are.....but you get the picture. ;)
Manassian Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 10:11 AM
:) I take it, you like it. I wanted to put racier images but....I had to be good. ;) Higs
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