Pursuit

Lanky, long, angular, lean
  face neither kind nor mean

Breezy walk along the avenue
  twirling something yet unseen

Abrupt turn into a narrow door
  glancing backward just before

Did he see me? Should she run?
  perhaps he has a knife or gun!

Chancing it, she waits outside the store
  he's in there half-an-hour or more

Her palms and knees bathed in sweat
  She's about to concede her foolish bet

Then out he comes, joyously
  a dozen roses, just for me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 1/15/2022 11:48:00 AM
Very suspenseful, gw, but with such a romantic twist, did not see it coming :)
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Date: 1/12/2022 7:31:00 PM
Love it, gw. You're humorous story-telling ability is really shining through on this one! But why is this scary-looking man bringing you a dozen roses???? I know, I know. You just write 'em, you don't explain 'em!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/13/2022 11:18:00 AM
You're welcome! I can stop thinking about it now!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/13/2022 6:53:00 AM
I couldn't explain it to myself either... I had intended this as a 'she-he' narrative, but didn't execute it correctly... So I've changed the pronouns now. Thanks for the question. :) gw
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