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Inspired by the beautiful song PURPLE RAIN by Prince.

My small tribute.

RIP

Purple Rain

Darkness befalls about me
Upon the heaviness of my heart
Pain drips from my every pore
Bleeding tears of loneliness
To rhythms of the purple rain
Aching for love you took from me
When you disappeared so suddenly 
Burning for that honey exhausted dry
To fill gaping trenches in my soul
The one remedy that would ail me
Heal the ache I feel for you
With every ounce of my being
Longing thirst for your essence
Your smile your voice
Craving the warmth of you
In this purple purple rain



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on April 9, 2020 for contest STRAND POETRY PICK 6 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

Originally posted on March 15, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 4/11/2020 12:44:00 AM
An emotional powerful piece Line. Congratulations on your wonderful First Placement! xxoo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/11/2020 1:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie.
Date: 4/10/2020 12:35:00 PM
A great win. Your pen was writing love and pain. Have a wonderful day, weekend and Blessed Easter...............
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Date: 4/10/2020 10:14:00 PM
Thanks, Paula. Most appreciated.
Date: 4/9/2020 11:16:00 PM
Powerful words, Line. "Longing thirst for your essence". A deeply sorrowful write. Congrats on your #1 ~ John
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Date: 4/10/2020 12:35:00 AM
Thanks, John. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/16/2019 6:57:00 PM
Wonderful, "pain drips from every pore", well written
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/16/2019 8:47:00 PM
Thanks, Timothy, for your much appreciated visit and compliment.
Date: 3/15/2019 3:13:00 PM
Ah, so poetically sound and gorgeous, my friend!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/15/2019 3:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren. Hopefully Prince is reading this up in genius heaven.
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