Notes About The Poem

Purple Pansies

Poetry is a mystic, sensuous mathematics of fire
smokestacks, waffles, pansies, people,
and purple sunsets.

                                  Carl Sandburg


PURPLE PANSIES

A pensive-pansy bouquet,
vibrant diffusion of lot,
Borscht belt, Catskill-sunshine core,
platonic petals of thought.

Purple pansies are childhood,
of God’s wide-eyed creation,
innocence in royal cloak,
a roused imagination.

Deft purpleness recollects,
not grandma’s frilly feast days -
a sixty’s mod Easter dress,
painted nails of royal praise.

Fresh fairyland apogee 
o’er green-sea, circular bowl.
Petal’s shades of light and dark -
a poet’s purple, vibrant soul.

6/1/2022
Purple Flowers Poetry Contest

used Rhymezone and HMS
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Goldsmith Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 8:43 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/picture. Be blessed with your win...........
Rodrigues Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 10:24 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Alex Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 12:33 AM
Viola. Very beautiful butterfly-like wonder. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 5:50 AM
Thank you, Christuraj! :)
Poet Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 8:28 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement, Kim... Very well-deserved dear friend. Warm hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 5:50 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Baker Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 3:49 PM
Love purple, a vibrant color. I liked the alliteration in this one, Kim. Good luck in the contest my friend. Hugs, Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 4:18 PM
Thanks so much, Bill ~ hugs
Chies Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 2:56 PM
Yes, this is a very well written poetry, demonstrating maturity, literary commitment, proper use of words, in short: sensational. Congratulations.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 7:27 PM
Thank you for offering words of encouragement! I appreciate it, Marco!
Pandit Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 8:16 AM
WOW! Superbly done, Kim. Exquisite vocabulary. Into my FAVES.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 8:36 AM
Feel so honored, Vijay! Thank you, dear friend!
George Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 5:30 AM
Oh Great .... a series of beautiful images strung together. ..profound and highly creative.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 7:23 AM
Thank you, Valsa! <3
DiMino Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 3:37 AM
Wow! My POTD of the day for sure. "Purple pansies are childhood, of God’s wide-eyed creation," God, I love this! Great imagery, the faces of purple pansies.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 7:23 AM
Thank you so much, Joe!
Wolf Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:44 PM
Looks like your Muse swooped back to you, and she's better than ever, Kim. Purple pansies are beautiful, but this poem is outright GORGEOUS! Bravo, Maestra! A veritable Picasso! ~ Gaugin
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:48 PM
Thank you so much, my friend!
Cunningham Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 3:52 PM
They are without a doubt beautiful flowers Kim. Love to see them in the garden. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 5:46 PM
They are so sweet! :) Thanks, Tom!
Proxenos Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 12:12 PM
Where do all these beautiful phrases and this exquisite creativeness come from, a heart of faith, a love of nature and a combination of the two. Hugs, Blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 1:29 PM
Thanks so much, Jennifer <3
Buhagiar Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 12:08 PM
How eloquent are your verses. Best for a win.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 1:29 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Romios Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 11:28 AM
Fantastically creative, Kim! Panagiota
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 1:30 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Hankins Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 10:09 AM
Exceptionally-well written, Kim. I love pansies, too. We used to have them in window boxes. They are a sweet little flower, indeed.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 1:31 PM
I appreciate it! They bring out our inner child :)
Thompson Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 9:04 AM
Beautifully crafted Kim. Was at the Chelsea Flower show last week so your poem is quite apt. Great write, thoroughly enjoyed...Ronnie x
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 9:35 AM
Thanks so much, Ronnie!
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