Purple Droplets of Rain

The soft sound of rain
Exquisite purple droplets
The jacaranda tree weeps
Wet purple kisses
 A welcome shower of love
Royal messengers of Spring
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horsman Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 2:44 PM
love the visual aspects of this wonderful poetry...
Lamoureux Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 8:26 AM
I have not seen this tree but I like the majestic feel of this poem. Happy Mothersday Eileen. Hugs Rick
Hicks Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 11:07 PM
I've seen the magnificent jacaranda trees only on the images they give on Google... sad to say. Never seen plants SO purple! Your messengers of Spring seem much more beautiful than ours... great sedoka!
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May 10, 2013 at 9:16 PM
Eileen, :-) I'm taking this moment to wish you an early Happy Mother's day. Just in case, I can't hang around the soup past Saturday Night. May you enjoy all the blessings a mother engraves in our hearts. About your poem: a very nice and soft image... love the gift left behind... LINDA
Burns Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 7:58 PM
Very pretty Eileen as usual. Thanks, Terry
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May 10, 2013 at 4:40 PM
Dear Eileen, Thank-you for reading "I LOVE YOU LENORE" If there is any way You can read past blogs You should read Chef's blog Titled "I LOVE YOU LENORE" That is how he wanted this POEM to look Like. Respectfully Flipper
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May 10, 2013 at 4:39 PM
Very Nice...as usual...You've got Soup Mail....
Esquire Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 4:24 PM
Dear Eileen, Wow I just sent a reply to this Post and YOU have already answered my comment. That was fast You must be on line right now. How are YOU. I truely like your Poetry. will read more later. Good Night. Respectfully, Flipper
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May 10, 2013 at 4:08 PM
Dear Eileen, Thank-you for your Soup mail about "Sedoka" How is this one : Jacaranda tree Purple for You,Blue for me Bloomings of a new Friendship Raining purple tears From the edge of a Rainbow. Arc of friendship, Poetry I am also writing to Sara Kendrick another Poetess on this site, who has interesting Poetry. IF; I repeat "IF" chef does everything he is suppose to do he will be sent home next Wednesday. Thank-you for your Correspondence. Respectfully Flipper
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May 10, 2013 at 4:17 PM
Dear Eileen,You have to read this 5-7-7,5-7-7 I wrote it that way but it is all bunched together. how do YOU get 6 seperate lines?? Is this Poem Plagerized if it is I will change it before I finish the Sedokas I will write Tomorrow, after I hear from You. Respectfully Flipper
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May 10, 2013 at 4:11 PM
This is really beautiful, Flipper! :) I love the visuals...the arch of friendship when referring to the rainbow. You've done well! I'm touched! Thanks for taking the time to write a poem for me! Very sweet of you! Yes, Sara is a dear who is very talented. I'm sure you'll make her happy. Love to Harry!
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May 10, 2013 at 2:11 PM
Dear Eileen, Good afternoon, although it is probably evening where you are. i know the Jacaranda tree is native to South America but I would say You live in one of the countrys that surround the Mediterrainien seaor you live somewhere in Africa. I have read this Poem 20 times and still do not know what or how to write a Sedoka. I truely like the words and format of this Poem. You are very Inspiring . I may try to write a Poem for You.Respectfully, Flipper.
Manassian Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 2:15 PM
It is evening where I am....Close to midnight. Yes...I can the sea from the university where I teach. It is up on a hill. Please feel free to do so! :) Look forward to reading it. BTW...if you go to the forms link on the top of the page...and then to the letter S...you will get to read up on Sedoka. Want a laugh? I thought I was writing a Tanka! What a joke! We all learn.
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May 10, 2013 at 1:04 PM
lovely!
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May 10, 2013 at 2:15 PM
Thanks, dear Ilene. :)
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May 10, 2013 at 1:00 PM
I never meant to cause you any sorrow. I never meant to cause you any pain. I only wanted to one time see you laughing. I only wanted to see you laughing in the purple rain. Purple rain, purple rain. Purple rain, purple rain.
Manassian Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 2:20 PM
I meant...this Sedoka doesn't do that moment justice! These purple trees did make me happy...BTW...love how you quoted the lyrics for me! Thanks! Sweet of you!
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May 10, 2013 at 2:18 PM
I knew before you added that little bit at the end that you were "singing" purple rain for me! Love that song by Prince! Did you check out my link so you could "see" the trees, Richard! They are so lovely. I put another pic up on FB. This actually happened. I paused from my morning walk to get rained on...Richard, how does one express oneself when words are not adequate? This sedoka does do it...It was an eternal moment!
Seal Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 1:03 PM
As Prince said and I echo, Lovely write Eileen
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May 10, 2013 at 11:57 AM
- Drip, drip purple raindrops everywhere ....... we have a wet spring day today. - Lovely written Eileen. - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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May 10, 2013 at 2:21 PM
Thanks, Anne Lise. I went camera mad two days ago and kept snapping away at that profusion of purple glory. They little flowers rained on me...how can one possibly soak all that beauty in? Have a great weekend. Hugs
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May 10, 2013 at 11:04 AM
Truly happy to be the first to welcome this new masterpiece in our Soup collections! Wonderful write, dear Eileen! I love the jacaranda trees with their sublime flowers! Love, Hanitra
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May 10, 2013 at 2:10 PM
Thanks ever so much for this lovely post, Hanitra. Very sweet of you! :)
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