Purest Light

a light shines inside
embracing wishes
i sail within feelings
opening the sails
emotions melting 
each time
closing these eyes
all i want
is you love

under this skin
crawls a dream
you and i
in paradise
as the moon 
peeps out
from dark clouds
floating past unveiling
a milky white smile

sparkling winks
lighting thousands
of stars
one bright star
shines the brightest
a distant dream
holds out hands
to Venus 

clouds cry 
weeping in happiness
falling emotion
sweet beautiful love
this world orbits
around feelings
circling you
softly in dreams
smiling inwardly
washing away darkness
light within
the nightsky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Chircop Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 4:01 PM
Under the skin crawls a dream/?you and I in paradise/ Closing these eyes all I want is you love/this world orbits around feelings circling you softly in dreams..These are my favourite lines and there are so many more.Im adding this beauty to my chest of favs.
Onclaud Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 2:00 PM
languid in its trails of expression, as always liam... i am impressed!..:) huggs
Manassian Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 1:28 PM
Wow...you wrote a new one so quickly....charming. Softly in dreams...smiling inwardly....Smiles all the way on this delightful piece.
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