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Purest Gold

When elements are melted down, it is something to behold A careful blend, a touch, a spark, can form the purest gold Mixed to blend by careful hands, some miracles unfold When halves are meant to fit as one, they form a heart that's whole I knew them well, from different worlds, they were meant to be as one He came to her, from a distant star, and she became his shining sun Strangers they had one time been, but love brought them together He had never been a father, but, four children called her Mother He brought along a gentle love, and was sure enough to give it She brought along a crazy life, and taught him how to live it! The day arrived, when they would wed, excitement filled the air On the fifth Yule day, they said their vows, and end to end were there...... The children, four, came through the door, to crowd the alter floor He pulled 5 rings, a diamond gleamed, upon her finger worn And 4 small rings, upon 4 chains, around their necks, he swore to honor them, and make them whole, and give the love he bore When elements are melted down, it is something to behold Some hearts are meant to fill the dark, and shine as purest gold 5 Yuletide Days, 5 gifts he gave,.... 5 times the love, ...and more __________________________________________ 12/29/14 For Contest: "Periodic Table of Elements" Sponsored by Anthony Slausen

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Date: 3/25/2015 9:52:00 PM
Great free verse Carrie. Much success to you in your PoetrySoup trails.
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Date: 1/11/2015 9:32:00 PM
Carrie,, congratulations on your well-deserved win, enjoying the elements above. Always :) LINDA
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Date: 1/9/2015 3:38:00 AM
What a special gift this beautiful poem is Carrie. I love it. Congratulations on your top win with this excellent entry!
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:26:00 PM
Very impressive winning work. Way to go! Creative idea used. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:41:00 AM
Like this one a lot Carrie , many congratulations luv xx
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Date: 1/7/2015 12:39:00 AM
Wow a romantic on periodic table! Great work Carrie! Congrats on win!
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Date: 1/6/2015 5:41:00 PM
Such a romantic! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/6/2015 4:59:00 PM
Congratulations, Carrie, on your excellent win! Such a creative and wonderful story that surely spoke to us from outside the box. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/6/2015 4:56:00 PM
Very creative, excellent story told, bonus I love the number 5. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 1/6/2015 2:21:00 PM
wow, a pure gold of a piece, carrie...so moving... big congrats on your stunning win!
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Date: 1/6/2015 1:20:00 PM
Tears with this write, you really melted my heart. Carrie, congratulations on a winner 7
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Date: 1/6/2015 12:26:00 PM
Purest Gold Carrie. Love. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/6/2015 12:14:00 PM
Congrats on the win carrie...huggs
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Date: 1/6/2015 12:09:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/6/2015 10:37:00 AM
Wow! an intelligent take on this subject, Carrie. Loved your rep. opening and closing lines. Congratulations on this deserved win. // paul
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Date: 1/6/2015 7:45:00 AM
congratulations Carrie on this much deserved win
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Date: 1/1/2015 12:21:00 PM
What a sweet masterpiece you have created dear friend."When elements are melted down, it is something to behold, A careful blend, a touch, a spark, can form the purest gold". Such excellent lines will only get engraved on canvas of reader’s mind Carrie. Great work from your crafted pen. Your poem goes as my favorite one. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Carrie Richards
Date: 1/1/2015 12:45:00 PM
Thank you so much for stopping in, Ravindra, and wishing you a most wonderful new year, and good health in the year to come! Blessings to you and yours!
Date: 12/31/2014 5:46:00 PM
A great work; now that we have seen the new year let's sing song to most high. Happy new year Carrie...huggs
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Date: 12/30/2014 4:34:00 PM
How delightful, Carrie. I'm swept away with this tale. Beautiful....Loved how he gave rings to the kids as well. What a guy! Hugs
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Date: 12/30/2014 9:40:00 AM
What a story!!!! Carrie. Touched me deeply. Wishing you and yours all the best in 2015. Your friend in poetry, Elaine
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Carrie Richards
Date: 12/30/2014 10:28:00 AM
Dear Elaine ! It is so wonderful to see you back, and so nice it is to receive such a wonderful comment for this little poem about some friends who married over the Christmas season. Thank you so much, and wishing you a wonderful new year as well !! As one of my favorite poets, I hope to see you here often in the New Year.
Date: 12/30/2014 7:28:00 AM
Elements of writing is melted down and the poem is something to read over and over, Carrie. Happy new year
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Carrie Richards
Date: 12/30/2014 10:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Dr. Ram, and thank you for your many comments and kindness this past year. May your new year be filled with many blessings !!
Date: 12/29/2014 8:06:00 PM
Carrie I was in tears by the end of this lovely write - a golden poem if ever I read one - good luck! hugs jan xxx
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Carrie Richards
Date: 12/30/2014 10:31:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Jan, and for the comments you have so often left at my door, I am truly grateful ! You have been most kind, and I wish you a wonderful new year ahead !! God Bless !!

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