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Pure Touch-Peterition

Preterition Contest Sponsor: Sara Kendrick Your touch is pure when loving me right, my man, my man, loving me right is as pure as your touch, let us not speak of this, words don't reach as I stand, heights of loving me right, my man, it is as such. Indeed, my man, I need hands that touch, the closing of our eyes does free your caress, kissing me under the stars, my man, it is as such, no words reach heights that do not express. Kissing me under the stars can reach heights above, your pure touch can be held when holding your hand, my man, no words can reach the heights of our love, your touch is pure when loving me right, my man. Date Written: May 1, 2016

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Date: 5/19/2016 10:49:00 AM
Very nicely worded with exceptional style my lovely friend. Congrats on your win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/18/2016 3:36:00 PM
Luloo, congratulations on your placement in Sara's Preterition Contest. Lovely poem! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/18/2016 8:31:00 PM
thank you Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 5/18/2016 10:00:00 AM
I like how you wove the Preterition into line three..Very creative and unique..Congrats on your winning work..Thanks for participating in my contest..Sara
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Date: 5/18/2016 8:30:00 PM
thank you very much Sara for my placement! I am most honored...Have a blessed night :)-luloo
Date: 5/1/2016 2:11:00 PM
When touched by the right man great heights can be reached, leading to pure love! Such a lovely poem, Laura; you're lucky to have such a man in your life:) ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/1/2016 3:41:00 PM
thank you Paul :)-luloo

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