Pure Mirth

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Special child’s bubbly laughter of pure mirth as he praises God* in sign language cheer ripples contagiously midst priceless worth fulfilling daily tasks with wheel chair gear. *Luke 19:37 … Rejoice and praise God with a loud voice for all the mighty works that they had seen. Quatrain with ABAB rhyme scheme July 23, 2021 2nd place, "Flair and Fun Quatrain Contest" Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger; judged on 8/18/2021.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2021 12:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write. I love how you added the bible at the end. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/18/2021 10:05:00 AM

Truly your special child is a source of "bubbly laughter" that ripples through delight. We are blessed as we watch him grow through your poems. Congratulations on your win Beata! Blessings to you!

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 8/18/2021 6:25:00 AM

This is number one with me, lots of fun and flair here despite major handicaps. You picture well the power of God. Love the "loudness" of the sign language. Congratulations on your elegant quatrain, Beata.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/18/2021 3:30:00 AM

I really wonder at your Biblical approach to everything. I think, in the realm of Poetry Soup you are known and you will be known forever. Congratulations on your win!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/23/2021 9:24:00 AM

What a lovely uplifting poem Beata I love reading poems about your special child, your love and faith shine through like a beacon:-) hugs Jan xx