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Pure Fantasy Episode 2 a Visit From Mars

Please read Episode 1 of PURE FANTASY to follow throu On a friendly mission we arrived Willing and ready to extend, Our hand to the people of earth I came to this planet as a friend From my home which is Planet Mars, President and ruler of the Galaxy Decorated with stars and bars, And often referred to as His Majesty! But, amongst Superheroes, Known as Echo Man, my voice is strong Reverberates throughout my domain,, I’m known for upholding the good And deleting the wrong! I can also read your mind, And allow mine to be read, I am one of a kind! Akin to me, no other across all planets And stars, Including Planet Earth! We come in peace, I begin to descend, let the uncertainty And animosity between us cease! I immediately sense hostility, A far cry from any call for unity As I step with hesitation Into an angry situation, It is already too late, for I am on Planet Earth’s threshold, Of a new tomorrow! Soldiers seize me from behind, Whilst thousands of troops surround And bombard Our ship, many of my men die! What an insane reaction, My Martians take off and Fly into the skies, Planet Mars idea, once an abstraction Is now ready to be put into action! Naive earthlings, do you not know that Superheroes from Venus and Mars, Do not regard or fear bars, You will soon feel the force Of our strength, As History takes its course! My Kingdom knows What has to be done, Fire Ball, your time has come, For us to rally, do you read my mind? Yes, she replies, for I am one of your kind!

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Date: 1/23/2020 11:58:00 AM
As I read backwards I smile, enjoying each piece which fit so uniquely together!
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/25/2020 7:05:00 AM
Hi Caren, glad you went back, because they are all one big story that continues one after the other, will be posting a 4th one soon. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 1/15/2020 7:58:00 PM
Now you have me captivated...lol Going to Bad boys poem.. great start :)
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Date: 1/25/2020 7:06:00 AM
Glad you are enjoying Charlie - I enjoy writing fantasy! Blessings, Jenny.
Date: 10/20/2019 11:37:00 AM
It's funny how we humans think that earth is the only inhabited planet in all of the universes that exist. We have egos that are more detrimental to our species than anything else. Lots of wisdom penned in this trilogy.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/22/2019 2:56:00 AM
I am certain there are others living on many planets which one of us is the most advanced is a curiosity that has always fascinated me - however I believe as you do. Hugs, MLK Jennifer.
Date: 10/15/2019 9:41:00 AM
WoW! Jennifer, I didn't expect for your next installment to turn out like this, but I must say I enjoyed it very much. I can't wait to see what you will write next. Have a fantastic day my friend. PS, I really appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/16/2019 3:10:00 PM
And I yours - the third episode is taking time because our move is taking priority at the moment - Can't wait to become settled in our new home and move back into normality! A wonderful comment as always, please forgive me if I'm a little behind with my comments - I will be catching up! Hugs and blessings, Jenny.
Date: 10/14/2019 12:20:00 PM
Pure Story-Telling my friend...excellento!...The Jennster strikes again...you are a superhero in your own right, my friend...We are going to call you...((((X.E-NOS))))~ protectress of the poetry realms lol...my next tale lol...^WW^ :o)
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/16/2019 3:05:00 PM
Your comments are amazing - I read almost all your comments to everyone on Soup, and you are a wise, wonderful poet whom we all love - thank you I will look out for your poem, but I always do in any case! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 10/10/2019 5:32:00 PM
Thanks for the note on this - it is a thrilling saga, excellent prose!
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/11/2019 1:15:00 PM
Pleasure, I'm falling behind with my comments and replies, when we are settled in our new home, my life will go back to normality, it is just chaos at the moment. Thanks for your great comment Michelle. Hugs, and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 10/8/2019 12:48:00 AM
Hello Jennifer … fear of the unknown and suspicious of another culture has been the cause of many wars on earth, so in your fantasy verse, life from another planet must be invasive. Fictitious maybe, but very close to the truth - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/11/2019 12:48:00 PM
You are right Lindsay, from the beginning of the existence of man, there has been war and friction - one wonders though if other planets do invade Earth, who will be the victor? Thanks for an interesting comment Lindsay - hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Date: 10/7/2019 3:43:00 PM
Lovely penning Jenny, great fantasy indeed for it makes one wonder!
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/11/2019 12:42:00 PM
Thank you Gordon - sorry I am only replying now but moving in 12 days time so hectic on this side. Glad you enjoy fantasy because I will be posting a 3rd episode. Thanks for a lovely comment my friend hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 10/7/2019 3:27:00 PM
Your narrative is one which holds the reader's attention with a promise of more to come, Jenny. And I am looking forward to more of the same! ~ Warm regards & hugs // paul
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/22/2019 3:05:00 AM
Hi Paul post my third and final episode on Saturday. Hugs, Jenny.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/22/2019 3:02:00 AM
Paul my friend, I remember answering your comment but I have a very bad habit of replying to a comment and going onto the next without validating - my most humble apologies - I vale your commment as you know,immensely. I do have one or two more phiosphical ones to post which I think you might like , Warm regards, hugs, and thank you always for your wonderful genuine support.. Jennifer.
Date: 10/7/2019 7:07:00 AM
A scary thought.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/7/2019 8:17:00 AM
It is rather, let's wait and see what happens for they will be joined by more superheroes so they will become a formidable force. Thanks for visiting and commenting. Hugs and blessings, Jenn.
Date: 10/6/2019 11:36:00 AM
You are a great storyteller.. you know how to create great imagery that draws the reader in...
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/6/2019 2:31:00 PM
Thank-you Silent One, that is what I really enjoy storytelling, and if I can draw readers, then I'm very happy - a lovely comment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 10/6/2019 8:47:00 AM
Great imagination and a gift for storytelling my friend--a splendid, creative write, Jennifer.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/6/2019 9:16:00 AM
Thank-you Vijay, it's always good to escape into fantasy land and forget about reality for just a while - thank you for a lovely comment - enjoy the coming week my friend, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 10/6/2019 8:44:00 AM
I enjoyed your story Jennifer, Well written..
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/6/2019 9:05:00 AM
Hi Joseph - thank you - so glad you enjoyed my fantasy tale there will be a third episode that I will post next week. Enjoy the coming week - hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 10/6/2019 7:59:00 AM
Great story telling Jennifer, look forward to part three the revenge. Have a great weekend. Tom
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/6/2019 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Tom, might make it a weekly episode - love your limericks, hope you will be posting some soon. Take care, God Bless, Jennifer.
Date: 10/5/2019 4:17:00 PM
- Full of imagination, my friend Jenny :) - The question of life on other planets makes it tickle in the stomach of excitement for many :) - For some reason, such fantasy beings have preferably been portrayed as small, green men .. .. but I've never seen them :) - Great written :) - I wish you a lovely weekend ... without a visit from Mars :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/6/2019 6:29:00 AM
It does, and in my imagination their space ships and every day life is not visible! Hope you have relaxing Sunday my dear friend! Hugs and Blessings, Jenny
Date: 10/5/2019 2:39:00 PM
Wow, Jennifer mou Your I agitation is just a cut above the rest. Hope all is well with you. You should look up Tom Dongo on line. I won't say anymore. Also read up on Sedona AZ.... Love, Panagiota. oxox I always wanted to stay at the Enchantment Resort in Sedona...also Online...
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/6/2019 6:05:00 AM
Thanks for the visit Panagiota mou and I have looked up Tom Dongo and Sedona and the Paranormal - have not had time to read yet but intend to do so this evening. Hugs, Jennifer.

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