Puppy Love

Puppy Love
It’s just puppy love they say, me romping with you all day. Oh well, what’s a little roll in the hay when you’re my toy, boy, and I wanna play.
07-31-2015 Contest: Micropoetry ain't that Tweet Sponsor: Casarah Nance Placement: 6th
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Makama Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 8:10 AM
longest time friend. You've just exhibited to the highest quality exactly what I have missed in here for months. Your lines are so exciting and your words are each having that second hand of drawing me back to them again and again and again irrespective of how many times I have gone through them. Its nice to be home and you are part of the reason I have this refreshing feeling. A definite 7. Cheers!
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October 13, 2015 at 6:50 PM
A warm welcome back - it's really great to hear from you, my dear friend! It's been a while and I am glad you are back to business! Thank you, thank you, for your wonderful compliments and high score which I always truly appreciate! All the very best to you! Pandita
Pinet Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 3:43 PM
We are all slaves to our feelings and when we allow those feelings free reign we open ourselves up to a whole new world of sensations. Emile.
Sietesantos Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 8:49 AM
That is so true - sometimes we have to take a chance on love to see the possibilities! Thank you, dear Emile, for the visit and for your on point comments! Have a great weekend. Pandita
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 4:46 PM
I love that romp!! Congrats, sweetie.
Sietesantos Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 1:39 PM
My dear Andie, thank you so very much for taking the time to visit and I am happy you enjoyed this piece. Thanks again and all the best! Pandita
Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 2:53 PM
((())) Puppy Love Congrats! :>) SK
Sietesantos Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 1:40 PM
Many thanks, dear Sara! I appreciate the congratulations! Warmest regards. Pandita
Lamoureux Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 8:08 AM
Naughty and fun! Congrats.
Sietesantos Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 1:41 PM
Tehehehe:-) I hoped you would like this one, Rick! Glad you did! Thank you, my friend! Pandita
Inman Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 7:58 AM
Playful indeed, love it! Like the form as well, Pandita.
Sietesantos Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 1:43 PM
Hi James, great to hear from you and thank you for leaving your lovely compliments on this piece. Have a wonderful day! Pandita
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 4:33 AM
made me smile - many congrats Pandita:-) hugs Jan xx
Sietesantos Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 7:13 AM
Awwww! I am glad that you enjoyed this one! Many thanks, Jan, and have an enjoyable weekend! Pandita
Wigley Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:58 AM
You can't beat this kind of hay fever, Pandita. Congrats! Viv x
Sietesantos Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 7:12 AM
Tehehehe:-) that's true! Many thanks Viv for your kind congrats! have a great weekend! Pandita
A. Sharma Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:09 AM
That's lovely Pandita! Congrats on big win!
Sietesantos Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:18 AM
Many thanks, Dr. Sharma! I appreciate the congratulations! Pandita
Nance Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 8:09 PM
Very fun, brought a smile to my face, thank you for entering and grats on placing ;)
Sietesantos Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 11:32 PM
Many thanks, Casarah, and it was my pleasure to participate and receive a placement on the winners list. All the best to you. Pandita
Ayala Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 7:33 PM
What a cute write, Pandita! You brought a smile to my face tonight! Good luck in the contest and a 7! I hope to see this piece on the winners list! Kika.
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August 6, 2015 at 7:40 PM
Dear Kika, I am happy that you liked this piece! Your compliments mean a lot to me! Hope you are enjoying the evening! Pandita
Sathasivam Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 8:02 AM
Nice and interesting write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Sietesantos Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 10:53 AM
Hi Ravi, great to hear from you and thank you for leaving your lovely compliments on this piece. Have a wonderful day! Pandita
Nunez Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 9:16 PM
lol! I like it! it's cute and risque depends on the readers how they take it. Way to go, my friend! All the best in the contest! hugs!
Sietesantos Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 10:50 AM
Hi Kim, thanks for the visit. I am happy you enjoyed this one. I had a lot of fun playing with it! Have a great day! Pandita
Boddie Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 10:03 AM
girl you better stop....and if you like to be on top....well that is just how I like it....puppy Love sounds weak, but it is too strong to fight it....;)
Sietesantos Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 10:48 AM
Tehehehe! You're so bad:-) True, puppy love may sound like it's really nothing much but it can be endearing and compelling! So, watch out, Eric - there it is!!
Gifford Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 9:32 AM
Light and funny poem. Loved your humor. Best of luck in the contest. ~~~Darlene
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August 2, 2015 at 9:46 AM
Hi Darlene, thank you so much for the visit and for leaving your lovely feedback and wishes. Warmest regards. Pandita
Severo Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 11:59 PM
haha I like this
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August 1, 2015 at 5:33 AM
Hi Aurere, I am happy that you stopped by and enjoyed this one! Thank you very much for the compliment! Have a great weekend! Pandita
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