Puppet Master

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unmitigated lies exhumed - undocumented truth entombed

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01/04/2019

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unmitigated lies exhumed - undocumented truth entombed

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/4/2019 9:48:00 PM

Wow few words, great result and meaning. Well done! Poetry wishes, Jennifer.

Mark Toney
Date: 1/4/2019 10:32:00 PM

Thank you, Jennifer! ~Mark

Sand Blown

Date: 1/4/2019 12:26:00 PM

just because the head cheese stinks doesn't mean some one's not ordering him to fart

Mark Toney
Date: 1/4/2019 2:03:00 PM

Lol...Sand Blown, it sounds like you're raising a little stink :) ~Mark

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/4/2019 12:10:00 PM

- Oh ... there are so many in this "puppet master" category ... sad but true ... love this deep line, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Toney
Date: 1/4/2019 1:55:00 PM

Thank you very much, Anne-Lise! ~Mark

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/4/2019 11:44:00 AM

Those that dangle lies in the presence of others, usually get tangled in them - in time. Soon, they hang themselves. No one like to be a Puppet, being pulled in a direction they don't wish to go. Your words say so much, and I thank you for saying it. Your support is appreciated. ~ Brandy

Mark Toney
Date: 1/4/2019 12:04:00 PM

You're welcome, Brandy. I appreciate your sobering perspective. Sometimes we don't recognize there are strings attached until much later. What we do then still matters. ~Mark

Jan Allison

Date: 1/4/2019 11:40:00 AM

Unfortunately I can relate so so so much Mark, all I'll say is dead men can't speak' and I wish one would leave me alone and 'get a life:-( hugs Jan xx

Mark Toney
Date: 1/4/2019 11:57:00 AM

I'm so sorry, Jan. I'm sending best wishes and happy thoughts to you! ~Mark