Pup

With a protective nature saving small birds, My pup juts out claws out the gate- Though looking different from other dogs Dear German Snicks slithers with an enduring gait... and one Sunday play, she fell pale, robust runs and charmed antics missed her tail sways...a cough, a much older stroll? How can I put her to greys of sleep? Missing her now, those barks which speak of love Reside in my heart as I think of her When that spirit- fire breathes away, Finally embracing the gentle wisp of light. ------------ Laura Loo's Contest 1/25/2016
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A   Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 11:08 PM
NETTE, Congratulations on your sweet Pet win. XOX ~LINDA~
A. Sharma Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 11:37 PM
What a delightful write nette..Congrats on big win!!
A  Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 11:56 AM
NETTE, CONGRATS ON YOUR LOVELY PET WIN. LOVE ** SKAT **
Garg Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 8:42 AM
Congrats Nette, how nostalgic I feel about my little birdie after reading this poem.
Canerdy Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your win with this sweet, touching poem. Janice
Haight Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 7:44 AM
So very sweet, Nette. I adore cats too. Congratulations on your nice win. hugs, Sandra
Lane Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 9:32 PM
Very well penned, Nette...congratulations.
Taylor Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 5:47 PM
Great write, Nette! Congrats.
Scars Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 3:50 PM
Oh Nette, so touching and lovable..Thank you for being a part of my contest. So sweet how you took care of them..Love that, so sweet ..*smiles* -luloo
Hamilton Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 5:39 PM
love your moral Nette superb poem congrats on win hugs
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 6:25 PM
Nette, congratulations on your top win for this adorable, well-written tale with a nice moral. Hugs, Sandra
A. Sharma Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 9:24 PM
How cute Nette ! love that tale, congrats on huge win!
Johnson Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 6:58 PM
Really cute story, Nette. Hope the coyotes didn't get them.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 6:38 PM
Great moral, congratulations Nette!
Allison Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 6:26 PM
dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 3:10 PM
Congratulations on your top win Nette. A very important message here. Cherish the moments while you can.
Yvonne Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 11:48 AM
A little sad but an important moral. Cherish every moment you have with those you love. Congratulations on your first place win, you didn't horse around you really went for it.
Callus Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 11:46 AM
Congratulations on your top placement, Nette! Enjoyed the relationship between pony and kittens, and your moral is worthy of being observed. // paul
Kayode Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 11:30 AM
Nice Story Nette and the lesson is clear,congrats on the win...huggs
Sirak Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 7:42 AM
This is such a sweet tale! I can just picture the pony racing along with two tiny kittens clinging to her back.
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 6:51 AM
Yes a story to ponder over. Time flits. I am sorry about the separation. I think Puff and Sugar are pretty strong to explore their world. Love netteXXXXXrajat
Smith Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 10:38 PM
I love the moral nette...too many times we take our loved ones for granted...hugs Tim
Dietrich Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 4:16 PM
Nette you wear many different hats.Now excelling in children stories! Love it, and the moral is wow. by the way, I want to make sure of something. Do our entries in your contest have to bear the title of the contest. Or can we use a related title if it makes more sense for our poem? Please just answer me in soupmail if I need to change my title; otherwise I will keep how it is. Thanks, dearie.
Torres Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 1:53 PM
Oh nette... this is so sweet! :) very well written... I almost giggle like a kid! ^_^ i miss you.. oxox
Allison Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 11:44 AM
oh what a lovely children's story Nette - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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