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Punched In Face By Fist In Face (High Critique Face Punched Version)

errrr strings burst from sirens lights strobe in our ears blinding us i can hardly listen to speaking mumbles a heavy bass resonates between us down another drink upside down countdown to rundown ooppps punched in face by fist in face blood falls out of face that has been punched by fist blood from face falls on floor fist removes from face placed down by bodies side unclenches screaming idiots covered in plasma laugh silently punch angrily die readily night ends on sticky floors fight ends before it began light comes on get out get out

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Date: 5/11/2010 5:58:00 PM
strange sort of for me, but who am I?
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