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Pumpkins Swelled

Outside his home a Geek finds a surprise Three lit pumpkins desiring compromise They wanted people to know their power He soon found them giving him a shower The evil resonates from deep inside Each Jack-O-Lantern shows off its great pride Fear that one experiences from each A fresh heart is just what they do beseech The Geek not knowing his untimely fate Approached the pumpkins which he fears of late Pumpkins swelled and grew absorbing his soul He fell, leaving his mark right on the knoll Halloween is not what it used to be When children walked around getting candy
Russell Sivey Entrant into Cyndi MacMillan's "TIMELESS YET CONTEMPORARY, A SONNET THANG" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/18/2012 11:40:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 10/18/2012 8:53:00 AM
CONGRATS RUSSELL LUV ON A MARVELOUS WRITE AND WIN .. UNIQUE IMAGINATIVE PIECE MY FRIEND
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Date: 10/18/2012 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations, Russell, on your special sonnet winning in Cyndi's contest. Love the ending couplet.
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Date: 10/18/2012 6:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your 10th place win in Cyndi's contest Russell. Love, Carol XXXX
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Date: 10/4/2012 2:32:00 PM
HI, Russell. I see you put Geek into this one. I was wondering which word you would use of hers for the contest!! It's great to see you trying a sonnet form. good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/2/2012 2:02:00 AM
yeow,graphic, powerful and quite contemporary, russell... halloween here takes a new mold with that geek -feel about it... take a bow, my friend.. marvelous!..:) huggs!
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